Hello and thank you so much for reading my story :]
The story may seem a tad confusing but it's *hopefully* going to keep you in a bit of suspense x3
Please review, this is my first proper story and it'd really help my confidence in story writing
I welcome criticism but please don't be too harsh xD I'm only 13 (14 in a week and a bit :D) and I know I'm not very good but I do want to become better
It's rated T for a bit of swearing and possible violence (but don't worry it won't be terribly detailed)
I do not own South Park - If I did right now I'd be jumping up and down waving my arms and looking like a right plonker ^_^
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
"Urgh...5 more minutes..."
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
"Aw fuck..."
BEEP! BEE-
The alarm ceased as a young boy crawled out of the covers and lazily slammed the snooze button down on his digital clock.
Monday – 7:50am it read.
The 12 year old took one glance at the illuminated screen, groaned and then dragged his feet to the bathroom to brush his teeth.
Not only was the Christmas holiday over which meant going back to school, but it was that time of the year when his Aunt Erin visited. Not that her coming round was bad, Kyle actually liked seeing his cousin Chris, but it meant that he'd have to put up with his mum fretting over him and his brother for the next week. Making sure they looked 'presentable'. Not to mention her inevitable obsession with cleaning the house, he was surprised he wasn't woken up earlier to the sound of the vacuum cleaner. In fact, the more he thought about it the happier he was about getting away from here, even if it meant going to school.
As Kyle stepped back onto the landing he realised how quiet the house actually was, he guessed they must all be downstairs already. As he made his way down the green carpeted steps, the red-head had expected to be caught amidst a flurry of cooking and cleaning, but no, again the only sound audible was birds singing.
After quickly investigating each room Kyle came to a conclusion.
Kyle's P.O.V.
Sweet, I'm home alone!
With an unusual bounce in my step I almost skipped to the kitchen (my original tiredness wearing off) to check the time on the oven.
8:05am
"Awesome-that's like a whole 30 minutes all to myself!" I exclaimed, practically beaming from ear to ear. Grabbing a box of cereal I began listing things I could do before I'd have to leave for the bus, but the phone ringing interrupted my thoughts.
Mummy's phone came up on the caller ID. Oh god I forgot she input all the contacts on this thing.
I picked it up, "Hello?"
"Hello Kyle, are you okay?" She sounded kind of upset.
"Uh yeah mum, where are you guys?"
"Your father had to leave for work early and me and Ike...well Boopie we're at the hospital."
"Oh god! Ar-Are you both alright?"
"Yes, yes of course we're fine."
"But then...why are you at the hospital?"
"...I'll explain when I get home Kyle."
"Um okay mum. Oh yeah is Aunt Erin still coming round later?"
"..." No answer.
"Mum?"
I heard her let out a loud sob before she put the phone down.
At that point I felt a sense of dread wash over me. I would've called Stan or Kenny for advice but my stupid mobile was dead and I'd lost the charger. I would see them at the bus stop anyway so I could talk to them then (and of course try to ignore the routine comments from a certain fat fuck). My plans for a bit of chill time by myself went to pot as I spent the next 25 minutes sitting on the edge of the sofa wondering why my mum was crying and what the hell had happened.
Ahah you can guess who the 'fat fuck' is xD
Oooh you're in suspense already O_o No?...Oh well...
Anyway I had a bit of a debate with myself over whether making Kyle or Stan taking on this role of the story (I don't want to spoil anything by going into details) but I really wasn't sure which to choose. The only reason I chose Kyle was cause I thought his mum would be more fitting...I'm sorry I'm probably not making sense so just ignore me -_-
Thanks again for reading!