kyra : this is my frist yyh fanfic, and i think i did a very good job for a beginner
Ghost-ku : this story sinks
kyra: (tears in her eyes)WHAT!!!!!!!!WHY? I worked so hard on this story
Ghost-ku: (pouts) 'cause i'm not in it
kyra : ( anime facefaults) Ghost-ku : (looks really sad) thats why this story is stupid
kyra : ( a anime sweatdrop appreesr on the back of her head) Ghost-ku you show up later on
Ghost-ku : ......really?
kyra : yeah.........
Ghost-ku : (Leaps into the air): YAHOOOOO!!!!!!!
Kyra : ok.................forget about him, he shows up later. Now back to the fanfic
Ghost-ku : I'M GOING TO BE A FANFIC STAR
kyra :....................................................(that what you think)
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things you should know before reading
{Thoughts}
[sounds]
" " = Japanese
Otaku (oh-TOCK-oo) An anime fan. In japan it's generally a negative term, but i like
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A black blur was jumping from tree to tree following a group of boys as they made there way to a temple on a new mission
At the same time three teenage boys were walking on a dirt path in the middle of the woods talking to each other.
Well, actually, two of them where talking to each other, the other one.....was muttering to himself about how he would like to get his hands on "the shimp"
One of the boys had black hair slicked with gel, though some strands keep falling to his forehead.
He's name is Yusuke Urameshi , wearing his favorite green jacket with matching green pants which no mater how badly they are covered in mud, ripped, burned, or even gets torn apart....they where nice, clean, and ready to use the next day.
The other boy was Kurama (aka Shuiichi Minamino) He had long red hair that flowed down to his waist, with two locks that framed both sides of his face- large green eyes that usualy looked innocent and gentle, but at that very moment they looked a little tired and very annoyed.
Kuwabara, a tall, goofy-looking chracter, with carrot-colored hair with an even more goofer voice wearing a blue school uniform. Was the guy that was muttering to him-self.
And the black blur that was following them was Hiei, a short red eyed fire deamon with jet black spikey hair highlighted by blue on the edges, and had a white star-shaped streak at the center.
there are a few reasons why he was jumping from tree to tree instead of walking with everbody else was:
1: the liked trees
2: it was more fun
3: he didn't want to walk with the others at that moment
4:He didn't feel like talking (like he ever talks at all)
5:he did want to be any where near Kuwabara
6: he-was-not-in-a-good-mood
in other words, no one was in a good mood...except Yusuke, who was just a little bit confussed
"So lets get this straight." Yusuke said. "This guy named Mark-ko whatever stole this necklace called the dream-lace, correct"
Kurama sighed, not in a good mood from some lack of sleep "Correct" he repeated (for the hundredth time)
"And this dream-lace thing can let anyone who uses it enter peoples dreams and do what ever they want?" Yusuke asked again
Kurama felt like he could jump for joy. Yusuke finally understood what he was saying for the first time all day.He gave the black hair teenager the biggest smile imaginable "That's correct Yusuke."
Yusuke was silent for a few seconds. Then crossed his arms over his crest and snorted "What the BIG deal about this mission again."
Kurama took a deep breath and closed his eyes. { I will not kill him...I will not kill him...i will not kill him} the red-head mutter though clench teeth.
After counting to ten Kurama got his temper back under control
"With the Dream-lace the user can either kill or enslaved someone else who is dreaming," Kurama growled, gazing at Yusuke from the corner of his eye. And hoping to kami that Yusuke will get it now. "And by killing more people he will abord their energy and become even stronger."
Yusuke mouth formed a 'O' shape "Wow.......that could be bad."
Kurama rolled his eyes and sighed {At lest Yusuke understands now. To bad i cant say the same thing about Kuwabara}
"Why that..grr.." mutter Kuwabara, fist clenched. Both boys gave the tick off carrot head a worry look with forming anime sweatdorps. "Umm." Yusuke took a look behind him to make sure a certain sword carrying comrade was out of hearing distance. "So do you think this dream-lace had anything to do with last night?"
[Flash Back]
It was the night before, and Hiei was having a strange dream that would change his life forever Hiei grown and stirred up in a tree that he had chosen to sleep in
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a dragon...a green dragon...purple eyes....a girl...a girl in danger_
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the fire demon grown again and stared to break out in a sweat
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_Hiei look all around. He was in room surrounded by darkness from all angles. The only thing he could see was himself and the only noise he heard was his own breathing "Where am I?" a voice echoed in the stillness. Hiei ,startled, turn around to find the owner of the voice. Standing right next to him was a teenage girl, obviously a human, with chocolate brown hair cut short so it barely touch her shoulders, kind-a like Keiko but it was more wilder and fizzy, She was wearing khaki pants, brown mud stain hiking-boots, a yellow T-shirt, and light green vest, but the most noticeable thing Hiei saw was her necklace. It was a dark green rock pendant with a splendid dragon carefully etched into the stone.
Hiei eyed the girl from the corner of his eye {how is it that I was not able to detect her presean before, "Where did you come form?"
the 'girl' didn't answer him
"I asked you a question."
"What the...." the girl looked around . "How did I end up here. Where the HECK is HERE?" The girl said to her-self as she turned around.....
...and went right though Hiei
Hiei was too shook to do anything. The girl didn't even see him and went right though him like a.... ...like a ghost Hiei eyes narrowed . He tries to trow his arms around the girl, but. His arms go right through her "What the hell is going on here." he tried to slaped the girl, but went right though her face Frustrated Hiei stould right in font of her and stared straight in to her purple eyes. Or trys too. He grits his teeth when he realize the girl was easily a full foot taller than him, almost taller that Kurama. "Who-Are-You?" he growled at her "Where am I ," She didn't even bat an eye at him. "I was walking though the woods just a second ago,"
"ARE YOU DEAF !!!"
she ignored him
Hiei screamed as loud as he could
she didn't hear Hiei
then she shouts up at the ceiling " HELLO...IS ANYONE HERE?"
"I'm right here, standing next to you. Baka."
"I knew i should of pack my flash light..stupid stupid stupid" apparently she couldn't see Hiei, and she couldn't hear him as well.
foots steps
Hiei couldn't understand how he was hearing footsteps considering that he couldn't see the ground but they definitely foot steps
"Who's there," the girl and Hiei said at the same time.
Hiei glared at her before turning his atention back to the foot steps
Someone stepped into the light..... where-ever the light was coming from no one knew Hiei's eyes nearly pop out of his head Standing there was a holographic picture of Hiei , same hair, same clothes, same evil smirk. the girl look at the Hiei- look -alike with confused violet eyes
"Uhn," the girl stammered in surprise "What...how...i must be dreamin-"
The fake Hiei drew a sword
"LOOK OUT!!! HE HAS A--"
[THASH]
the next thing , she was dead, laying in a pool of blood on the floor
Hiei stared at the imposter that look exactly like him.
"WHO ARE YOU!" the fire demon demanded holding his katana
the Hiei look-a-like grinned at him "You will find out-" the imposter said taking a blow as if he had just finesse a performance "-if you live that long that is."
Hiei lung toward the his mirror version of himself at what seemed to be an impossibly fast speed, but his sword but goes right trough him, instead, he slams into a wall, and falls to the ground in an unsightly pile.
"Goddammit." Hiei's body was suddenly racked with pain as strands of energy coursed around his body. "aahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!"
The pain was unbearable.
Hiei slowly slumped to the floor as his vision began turning white around the edges.
"ARR-"
**** "-RRGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" Hiei screamed out again falling from his tree and landing on the now fully awaken Kuwabara who was sleeping right under that tree
[End Of Flash Back]
Kurama took a look behind him at the black blur that was Hiei before turning to look at Yusuke
"That...could be a very likely possibility."
Ghost-ku : this story sinks
kyra: (tears in her eyes)WHAT!!!!!!!!WHY? I worked so hard on this story
Ghost-ku: (pouts) 'cause i'm not in it
kyra : ( anime facefaults) Ghost-ku : (looks really sad) thats why this story is stupid
kyra : ( a anime sweatdrop appreesr on the back of her head) Ghost-ku you show up later on
Ghost-ku : ......really?
kyra : yeah.........
Ghost-ku : (Leaps into the air): YAHOOOOO!!!!!!!
Kyra : ok.................forget about him, he shows up later. Now back to the fanfic
Ghost-ku : I'M GOING TO BE A FANFIC STAR
kyra :....................................................(that what you think)
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things you should know before reading
{Thoughts}
[sounds]
" " = Japanese
Otaku (oh-TOCK-oo) An anime fan. In japan it's generally a negative term, but i like
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A black blur was jumping from tree to tree following a group of boys as they made there way to a temple on a new mission
At the same time three teenage boys were walking on a dirt path in the middle of the woods talking to each other.
Well, actually, two of them where talking to each other, the other one.....was muttering to himself about how he would like to get his hands on "the shimp"
One of the boys had black hair slicked with gel, though some strands keep falling to his forehead.
He's name is Yusuke Urameshi , wearing his favorite green jacket with matching green pants which no mater how badly they are covered in mud, ripped, burned, or even gets torn apart....they where nice, clean, and ready to use the next day.
The other boy was Kurama (aka Shuiichi Minamino) He had long red hair that flowed down to his waist, with two locks that framed both sides of his face- large green eyes that usualy looked innocent and gentle, but at that very moment they looked a little tired and very annoyed.
Kuwabara, a tall, goofy-looking chracter, with carrot-colored hair with an even more goofer voice wearing a blue school uniform. Was the guy that was muttering to him-self.
And the black blur that was following them was Hiei, a short red eyed fire deamon with jet black spikey hair highlighted by blue on the edges, and had a white star-shaped streak at the center.
there are a few reasons why he was jumping from tree to tree instead of walking with everbody else was:
1: the liked trees
2: it was more fun
3: he didn't want to walk with the others at that moment
4:He didn't feel like talking (like he ever talks at all)
5:he did want to be any where near Kuwabara
6: he-was-not-in-a-good-mood
in other words, no one was in a good mood...except Yusuke, who was just a little bit confussed
"So lets get this straight." Yusuke said. "This guy named Mark-ko whatever stole this necklace called the dream-lace, correct"
Kurama sighed, not in a good mood from some lack of sleep "Correct" he repeated (for the hundredth time)
"And this dream-lace thing can let anyone who uses it enter peoples dreams and do what ever they want?" Yusuke asked again
Kurama felt like he could jump for joy. Yusuke finally understood what he was saying for the first time all day.He gave the black hair teenager the biggest smile imaginable "That's correct Yusuke."
Yusuke was silent for a few seconds. Then crossed his arms over his crest and snorted "What the BIG deal about this mission again."
Kurama took a deep breath and closed his eyes. { I will not kill him...I will not kill him...i will not kill him} the red-head mutter though clench teeth.
After counting to ten Kurama got his temper back under control
"With the Dream-lace the user can either kill or enslaved someone else who is dreaming," Kurama growled, gazing at Yusuke from the corner of his eye. And hoping to kami that Yusuke will get it now. "And by killing more people he will abord their energy and become even stronger."
Yusuke mouth formed a 'O' shape "Wow.......that could be bad."
Kurama rolled his eyes and sighed {At lest Yusuke understands now. To bad i cant say the same thing about Kuwabara}
"Why that..grr.." mutter Kuwabara, fist clenched. Both boys gave the tick off carrot head a worry look with forming anime sweatdorps. "Umm." Yusuke took a look behind him to make sure a certain sword carrying comrade was out of hearing distance. "So do you think this dream-lace had anything to do with last night?"
[Flash Back]
It was the night before, and Hiei was having a strange dream that would change his life forever Hiei grown and stirred up in a tree that he had chosen to sleep in
************************* _
a dragon...a green dragon...purple eyes....a girl...a girl in danger_
*************************
the fire demon grown again and stared to break out in a sweat
*************************
_Hiei look all around. He was in room surrounded by darkness from all angles. The only thing he could see was himself and the only noise he heard was his own breathing "Where am I?" a voice echoed in the stillness. Hiei ,startled, turn around to find the owner of the voice. Standing right next to him was a teenage girl, obviously a human, with chocolate brown hair cut short so it barely touch her shoulders, kind-a like Keiko but it was more wilder and fizzy, She was wearing khaki pants, brown mud stain hiking-boots, a yellow T-shirt, and light green vest, but the most noticeable thing Hiei saw was her necklace. It was a dark green rock pendant with a splendid dragon carefully etched into the stone.
Hiei eyed the girl from the corner of his eye {how is it that I was not able to detect her presean before, "Where did you come form?"
the 'girl' didn't answer him
"I asked you a question."
"What the...." the girl looked around . "How did I end up here. Where the HECK is HERE?" The girl said to her-self as she turned around.....
...and went right though Hiei
Hiei was too shook to do anything. The girl didn't even see him and went right though him like a.... ...like a ghost Hiei eyes narrowed . He tries to trow his arms around the girl, but. His arms go right through her "What the hell is going on here." he tried to slaped the girl, but went right though her face Frustrated Hiei stould right in font of her and stared straight in to her purple eyes. Or trys too. He grits his teeth when he realize the girl was easily a full foot taller than him, almost taller that Kurama. "Who-Are-You?" he growled at her "Where am I ," She didn't even bat an eye at him. "I was walking though the woods just a second ago,"
"ARE YOU DEAF !!!"
she ignored him
Hiei screamed as loud as he could
she didn't hear Hiei
then she shouts up at the ceiling " HELLO...IS ANYONE HERE?"
"I'm right here, standing next to you. Baka."
"I knew i should of pack my flash light..stupid stupid stupid" apparently she couldn't see Hiei, and she couldn't hear him as well.
foots steps
Hiei couldn't understand how he was hearing footsteps considering that he couldn't see the ground but they definitely foot steps
"Who's there," the girl and Hiei said at the same time.
Hiei glared at her before turning his atention back to the foot steps
Someone stepped into the light..... where-ever the light was coming from no one knew Hiei's eyes nearly pop out of his head Standing there was a holographic picture of Hiei , same hair, same clothes, same evil smirk. the girl look at the Hiei- look -alike with confused violet eyes
"Uhn," the girl stammered in surprise "What...how...i must be dreamin-"
The fake Hiei drew a sword
"LOOK OUT!!! HE HAS A--"
[THASH]
the next thing , she was dead, laying in a pool of blood on the floor
Hiei stared at the imposter that look exactly like him.
"WHO ARE YOU!" the fire demon demanded holding his katana
the Hiei look-a-like grinned at him "You will find out-" the imposter said taking a blow as if he had just finesse a performance "-if you live that long that is."
Hiei lung toward the his mirror version of himself at what seemed to be an impossibly fast speed, but his sword but goes right trough him, instead, he slams into a wall, and falls to the ground in an unsightly pile.
"Goddammit." Hiei's body was suddenly racked with pain as strands of energy coursed around his body. "aahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!"
The pain was unbearable.
Hiei slowly slumped to the floor as his vision began turning white around the edges.
"ARR-"
**** "-RRGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" Hiei screamed out again falling from his tree and landing on the now fully awaken Kuwabara who was sleeping right under that tree
[End Of Flash Back]
Kurama took a look behind him at the black blur that was Hiei before turning to look at Yusuke
"That...could be a very likely possibility."