Well this is a interesting story that I have been thinking of writing but I never did. PLEASE PLEASE review

I turned around to see a boy about 18 with dark hair and piercing green eyes but his eyes seemed to wonder around as If he was lost. The word stop still echoed in my mind. I felt my foot slide on the bare floor. And I came tumbling down from the high building. It seemed as if my whole life flashed before my eyes. I remebered how I was the last person waiting for a team. I remembered how my own family rejected me from the first time I was born I was rejected from my on family. I rememebered how no one liked me when I was in 9th grade. I remebered how by the time everyone was 16 I was the only one who never kissed a boy. I remebered by the time I hit the ground I would never remember all these things and I would be once in my life lifted from my suffering. All light disappeared till that same piercing green infected my eyesight

I opened my eyes to find myself still in New York City but instead of being on a roof of a high skyscraper I found myself on a bench. But I noticed there was someone next to me. I couldn't see the face completely but I could still identify those same piercing green eyes that seemed to still be wondering around as it he was lost. He opened is mouth as if he was about to say something but before he could talk I asked him a question.

"Am I in hell"

"No but you should be"

"Why"

"Because you tried to kill your self"

"So"

"Do you even remember me"

"No"

"Think, remember we were best friends"

"I never had a best friend"

" You had 7 including me"

I thought about this for a moment he didn't sound like he was lying but I remember for a fact that for my whole life no one speaked to me.

"Come on Cammie, Remember the names Bex, Macy, Liz,Grant,Jonas,Dave and Zach! he said in an angry tone.

"I have no memory of that"

"What's wrong with you"

"I dont know"

Pls Review if you don't I will hunt you down and kill you with my bare hands just kidding but pls review whoever does will be really nice. Hope you like the story

And srry bout the failed attempt for a cliff hanger