Alone Now
The sands of time blow around my feet ,
I was ready to meet my fate ,
My life was ready to fade ,
But I'm not sure of my fate .
The painful hot sands ,
Burn my weak feet ,
My tears fall onto this parched land ,
I'm sure I see the end of the road up ahead .
But I will have to face it alone ,
Everyone thinks that I'm dead ,
Everyone but my dearest friends ,
No one knew that I fought a noble war for a noble cause.
No one would of cared ,
Now I face my fate alone ,
The times of old are gone ,
I have to face death's gates without another soul .
I have to face the end of my life ,
As what had been decided long ago ,
I'm one of the chosen ones ,
One point on a star .
Just a point of a star in the sky ,
Justified as dead ,
Never existing at least not anymore ,
Now I face my fate alone .
Please review , I want your opinions . They matter a lot to me . This is a test poem , I really can write better poems . But I thought this might also be a test fan fiction , so please tell me if you like it or not . Because if you like I will write more Animorphs fan fiction , if you don't I will change my style of writing to the style you suggest . So please if you flame , tell me what I did wrong . So I can change what I did , so I can make it better . So please review !!!!!!
The sands of time blow around my feet ,
I was ready to meet my fate ,
My life was ready to fade ,
But I'm not sure of my fate .
The painful hot sands ,
Burn my weak feet ,
My tears fall onto this parched land ,
I'm sure I see the end of the road up ahead .
But I will have to face it alone ,
Everyone thinks that I'm dead ,
Everyone but my dearest friends ,
No one knew that I fought a noble war for a noble cause.
No one would of cared ,
Now I face my fate alone ,
The times of old are gone ,
I have to face death's gates without another soul .
I have to face the end of my life ,
As what had been decided long ago ,
I'm one of the chosen ones ,
One point on a star .
Just a point of a star in the sky ,
Justified as dead ,
Never existing at least not anymore ,
Now I face my fate alone .
Please review , I want your opinions . They matter a lot to me . This is a test poem , I really can write better poems . But I thought this might also be a test fan fiction , so please tell me if you like it or not . Because if you like I will write more Animorphs fan fiction , if you don't I will change my style of writing to the style you suggest . So please if you flame , tell me what I did wrong . So I can change what I did , so I can make it better . So please review !!!!!!