Hello every body this is my first story so I would love if you gave suggestions or pointer on how to right and I would also love if you pointed out spelling mistakes so that I could fix them.
Also the line after the story starts in in first person of the fallout boy just so you know what type of story it is.
It was a warm day in the courtyard of the school and all the students of the third year classes were summoning animals that were going to be there familiar. One by one all got a familiar until the final person Louise de La Vallière or also Louise the zero she was going to summon a familiar for the first time but before she could start Kirche started saying.
"you're never going to be able to summon a familiar zero, and if you do it will probably be a horrible one!" Kirche then started laughing "Shut up!" Louise said. "I will be able to Summon a familiar and it will be the most powerful familiar to ever exist" "if you are so confident than prove it" said by Kirche.
"now Kirche stop making fun of Louise" Mr. Colbert said "let Louise summon a familiar and continue on with the class". "thank you Mr. Colbert" Louise said "now can you be quiet so that I can get started with the spell" "go ahead Louise start the process". "yes Mr. Colbert" Louise said while looking at Kirche smirking.
Louise than started to chant the spell soon there was a circle of light forming for a moment that all of a sudden there was an explosion. Kirche laughed while wiping away dirt on her clothes "see I told you that you couldn't do it" Then the whole class started laughing. Louise looked hurt and as soon as she was about to walk away someone yelled "wait what's that by the wall".
It was midday in this place we called earth. The sun in this area of the United Stats felt like everything is on fire and the air was even hotter. Me, a couple of guards, some traders, and a crudely made buggy car full of supplies were going through the abandoned roads of Nevada.
Going between lake mead and scrap town of Boulder city. "hey" one of the traders said "make sure your weapons are ready there has been a lot of raiders around here lately". Some of the guards made sure that there magazine's had ammo loaded to the brim. I wiped the eyes of my gas mask to see better "you know that you don't need to wear a gas mask around here" the guard right next to me said "the southern part of Nevada was one of the few places that didn't get hit and plus your wasting air from you canisters when wearing it".
"I know this place didn't get hit by anything serious I just like to wear one anyway just in cause of smoke or anything like that" I said while making sure the straps on the gas mask were on right "plus I have filters that use the air around us so I only need four" the guard look confused "why only four?" I looked at him and said "because they each of them last two hours before I have to clean them and cleaning them is just as easy as washing them.
"so you wast purified water on them" the guard looking less confused "not exactly" I say "I use something that my body produces no matter how dirty the water is" I start to laugh it took him a second realize what I meant "gross so you piss on them". "yup" I start to laugh even more "its better than having a canister of air that lasts half an hour". "good point" the guard says "were did you buy them?" I got them from a deal in Colorado while passing through" the guard looked amazed.
"do you have ant spares" I took the leather bag from my bag and check through it "mre, first aid bag, bullets, pipe bomb, ah here they are two filters". The guard checks the side pocket of his bag while asking how much do you want for them?". "nothing" he look at me confused while I continue "the only thing that I want is to know your name". "my name?" he said "yeah your name" "well my name is Christopher but every body calls me Chris" "well hi Chris my name is Brent and here you go".
I gave him the two filters "well thanks Brent" no problem "GRENADE!" out of nowhere some one yelled and everybody jumped and landed on the dirt. There was an explosion then there was a ringing in my ears. There was dust everywhere and gun fire started to come in all directions everyone was scrambling to get behind the cart all of a sudden I tripped and fell the next thing I knew I was on the ground and I was in a lot of pain.