You might notice this story has changed... Indeed it has and it will change more, because I want to be a better writer... If you think there has been any improvement at all then tell me. I'd very glad to know all about it.

Let's get the chapter started! Yay!

I will give a lot of backstory because I feel like it is correct... I don't know how often I'll do that but... I will.

What age are they? Nick: 16 Judy: 16

I made some changes to this episode and fixed some grammar mistakes.


Time: 6:50 Am 8/4/2016

Judy was situated in the Hopp's house to be more specific she was on the kitchen... Finishing what was left of her breakfast, carrot waffles can be very delicious... For bunnies... Carrot juice can also be very delicious... For bunnies, everything didn't have to deal with carrots but let's keep it true... Our favorite bunny wears shirts that have smiling carrots... How adorable is that?

"Mom! I'm going to school any minute where are the keys?" Judy didn't really yell even though she was on the kitchen and her mom was on her room... With the door closed. Yup being a bunny can give you a few advantages... Sometimes only sometimes, because she has experienced how much it can hurt having those big ears of hers... Listening to a crash, a gun firing, someone breaking a plate... But if you don't want to yell at your house... Well it works. "Judy the keys are in your nightstand next to your bed, just where your clock is." Bonnie Hopps responded.

"Thanks mom I'm getting them right now." Judy got of from the bunny sized table... Which was actually pretty big though. She went to her sink and washed her plates... Never forget to wash the soap out of it Judy... Because she once ate in a plate that was full of soap because she did t clean it too well. That is completely not going to repeat... Ever!

So she cleaned her paws as well and also dried her paws... She doesn't want her paws to look like a sheep's wool. Judy liked to comb her fur patiently to make her look better.

Her mission right now was to get the keys to her home so when she comes back from school she can open the door, she was too eager to notice that the hallway that led to her room was populated... By her sister... Oh no it was... God.

She didn't feel like getting teased by her sister... Not today... Kaycee was a very hardworking bunny, just like her... But she always came back home with a different boyfriend... This pissed Judy off to no limits... Playing with other mammals hearts that way... It isn't okay not at all.

What did she teased Judy with? Well she majorly made fun of how she never came back with cool things to say... It was always the typical: 'I had a very hard day and I feel like going to sleep because I'm tired.' But her sister came back with stuff like this: 'Mom I have a new boyfriend... He is also the son of the president... And he is a wolf.'

Judy was stopped from her train of thoughts by the honking of the bus... God that was annoying the honkings were too loud for them and it was really, really, annoying.

"I don't have time to talk Kaycee I really need to get going as you see I'm in a rush so please... Don't annoy me." Then Judy ran away from her sister who was not impressed with Judy's attitude... Always so eager always so naive... Dumb younger sister. she sighed while she lost the view of her.

"Keys, keys, keys, where are you." She tried to think about what her mom said and remembered that they were on the nightstand, her nightstand was pretty empty just a few things such as... Her phone, a lamp and a clock.

Before exiting her room she took one last sight just to confirm she is not leaving everything behind... Nope it seemed like everything was in order. Her police officer poster are where they should be, her Justin Beaver was there, and also her few various toys from when she was a kid... They were paw cuffs, and some toy guns... She really wanted to be a police officer.

Judy's mornings were normally not this... How to say it? Crazy as far as Judy's mornings normally are... She just does her regular routine and then eats. But this day her plans got frustrated by wanting to sleep a little bit more.

Judy was so immersed in her thoughts she didn't notice she was already at the doorsteps of her house... Then she noticed the yellow bus with black stripes... So much for looking like a bee.

her house front yard was very cute... As green as a front yard could be, flowers everywhere and some trees to get a good shadow some bushes with flower shapes... Yup very bunny like.

She used her watch and noticed only 2 minutes passed from everything she did... Going through the hallways, telling her sister to not annoy her right now... Checking her room, she was impressed by her own speed and cheered herself. 'Good job Judy!'

When she finally got into the bus she was received by the normal driver... A female artic bunny, she is very nice and tries to get Judy home whenever she could, so Judy waved at her and she nodded and waved back, her name is Alicia.

She walked through the whole bus but found out her friends are not in the bus today... They probably decided to get to school earlier and walked there.

Whenever she walked through the bus it was as if every male was thinking like this: 'Will Judy seat with me?' She was admired by a lot of males... Judy is a beautiful bunny and she was also very smart, so almost all of the males on school drool for her... But she really needed to study, achieving being the valedictorian wasn't an easy job, and it takes a lot of time to get that kind of recognition.

Every seat was taken... Some males were even getting off their seats offering it to Judy as a kind gesture but, she told them it was completely okay and thanked them... Which was enough to make the males blush. Indeed every seat was taken and she needed to go to the complete back of the bus... But just then the bus shaked and she lost her balance... She almost fell just to be catched by the hands of a wolf... Just when she was going to apologize for her clumsiness, the wolf put a finger on her mouth she notice he had withe fur... "Shh, it's okay it's not like I was going to let you fall, what kind of mammal would I be if I did that?"

She had never seen this white furred wolf before and she wondered what his name might be so she looked at his face and blushed... Oh god, he was really handsome... She couldn't say any words after seeing his face... So she just nodded in agreement and went with him to the back of the bus... They really didn't talked about anything... Mainly because they were both impressed of how cute they both were. So they just looked everywhere but into their eyes.

When Judy finally got to the back of the bus she saw his best friend... Nick Wilde in the flesh... They've been friends since years now... And they weren't planing to end their friendship, after all... It was completely healthy for both of them... For his looks, Nick was as handsome as the wolf she just met, or maybe more... But she wasn't going to feed his ego and tell him that.

"Hi Romeo and Juliet, specially you Juliet, how is your morning? You know besides almost falling, and getting late to the bus? Is this because of your boyfriend? Because if it is then he clearly is a bad influence." Nick Wilde said with a smug grin.

The yet nameless wolf scoffed and seated just between Judy and Nick, separating the two of them. That wolf was so white... Nick had the best nickname for him, putting nicknames is one of his favorite hobbies, besides annoying the bunny or hanging out with her.

"Nick he is not my boyfriend and really? Juliet? You are better than that!" Judy knew Nick as one of the most laid back mammals she could find... He was smart and calculating when he needed, to be but normally he was just really lazy and always wearing that smug grin.

"Do you even know snowball's name?" Nick was very intrigued by the new guy, he knew because he had never seen him before. "I have to say I actually like the nickname... That is a good one Nick." Judy said with a few giggles, something that Nick knew to do was making mammals smile... And by mammals he meant Judy.

"My name is not snowball! My name is Aiden... And is a pleasure to meet you both, could you also say your names and introduce yourselves? Please if it's not any bother." Okay that was beyond adorable so Judy just hugged him and before even nodding she was just shocked of how incredibly fluffy his fur is... So fluffy... Fluffyness... Judy was kind of in a trance... To much fluffyness and adorableness for her. Let's call it a fluf-overdrive.

Aiden was looking away from the bunny, he was blushing so much, and his ears were also very hot... The bunny is too cute I can't handle it... And he too ended up like Judy... Both fell in a fluf-overdrive.

Nick sighed angrily and then flicked one of Judy's ears and just then she awoke from her fluf-overdrive... And got a heavy blush realizing almost all of the bus was staring at them... This was so embarrassing, most of the males were disappointed... And most of the females were raging mad because Judy always got all of the attention.

"Are you sure he is not your boyfriend Mrs. Too fluffy?" He received a punch from Judy, he knew they were playful little punches but they actually hurt, and he didn't even know how.

"If you say one more thing right now... I will kill you, Nick Piberious Wilde." Then he realized the look she was giving him... It was 'the look.' It would scare every mammal off, doesn't matter what kind, at least that is what the leyends say... And that is not how Nick ended up, he was actually holding back a laughter at Judy's attempt of being scary, so he just shrugged 'the look' off no get Judy mad... Funny thing was that snowball was still in his trance, touching and hugging Judy's ears.

"Can you please make him stop?" Judy asked as nicely as she could... It was going to be hard to make Nick do something, it was even harder to make him do something for her... She knew most of the times he would help her, but sometimes he just does the complete opposite to annoy me more. "Why should I Carrots? I mean I'm enjoying this... If I had my phone right now I'd be recording it."

Judy just sighed in defeat and waited for the bus to reach the school while having a fox sending her the dumbest of jokes, and a white wolf hugging her ears... Al this in just one day. And it was barely starting... So much for a normal day of school.

She almost fell asleep, the ear massage the wolf was giving her was too caressing and it felt so good... She just wanted to drift to sleep in his arms. But thank god that the bus gave two honks signaling they were already at the school, this woke up the fluf-overdriven wolf and made Judy slightly jump from her seat by the sudden noise and Nick... Well Nick just slept through it. Judy sighed and then grabbed one of his ears and flicked it... Harder than she has ever done.

"Ow, ow, ow, and what was the reason for that you carrot lover?" Nick said without his typical smug grin, which changed to a slight frown of hurt, not anger... He could never get mad at that bunny.

"Remember what was happening?" She signaled Aiden who was distracted by watching everyone get off the bus. "For that, I told you to help me and you didn't do anything." "Do anything about what?" Aiden got close to both of them. Judy gave a slight jump and started blushing like crazy. "She is just so embarrassed all the bus saw you and her petting each other. That is it, nothing out of normal." Nick changed his frown for what he called his 'cute smile'

"So- sorry I- I- bye!" He said stammering and quickly ran off the bus... "Don't you always pick the good ones huh?" Nick said to her and she responded with a not so kind punch. And almost as fast Aiden they both got off from the bus that was deserted.

Judy looked at her school in amusement, she never saw how pretty it was since now... The gras was not tall but it had a good measure... The gymnasium could be seen from the front of the school, then she noticed the not-so-tall buildings and remembered why... It is like that because is a middle sized animal school, so things weren't super big, neither they were super small. Having a lot of mammals made differences such as those.

The school looked quite nice mammals walking around and chattering oblivious to what was ahead of them literally. wasn't different with Judy she was so immersed in the talk Nick and Judy were having... It was about who was more fluffy... Those talks could get real dangerous. In more ways than one ;)

Indeed so inmersed with their talk Judy didn't see who was in front of her and bumped into someone's chest she didn't look up at first, but then heard her voice and she was very disappointed on who it was... "What do you want Britney? I'm pretty sure you have better things to do than mess around here, your grades demand it you flat-chested." Judy said with a smug grin that she adopted from Nick.

Nick was squealing in joy, finally his bunny was starting to be sassy with the people she dislikes... He had a wide smile on his face to see his bunny roasting the poor lioness who's name is Britney... She also confessed her love for Nick a few days ago... That dint go quite well for her since Nick completely rejected her... Why? The why is the reason she hates Judy..

She hates Judy because Nick rejected her and told her this: "You annoy Judy too much, I'm sorry we can't be together, bye." He didn't care a bit about the lioness's feelings.

"Nick did you just heard what she said?!" She asked offended by what Judy just said to hear... "I heard what she said." He turned to Judy and knelt down... "Judy... I'm very impressed! Well done!" Nick was happy she getting the hang of this, you know... All the roasting thing.

"You guys are just... Ahh!" She stormed off completely mad and didn't care about what surrounded her... She got hit by a door when it was opened... That is some bad luck, but Nick and Judy laughed at it.

"So... Nick how did I do?" Judy asked and put her arms behind her trying to look as adorable as she could, maybe like that she would get a praise from Nick. "There is room for improvement, but I believe you can do a better work." Judy didn't expect Nick to waste so much time on thinking of something nice to say... Yup saying nice stuff was hard for Nick.

Judy started walking towards her English classroom... To be stopped... Someone tugged her on the collar of her shirt from behind... It was Nick. She wondered why did he do that but guessed he just wanted something. "There were changes on our schedules... Ah you dumb bunnies." He gave a really slow and loud sigh.

"You don't have to call me and other bunnies dumb." She tried to sound as sad as she could so Nick would say something nice but she definitely didn't expect this response. "Nha you bunnies all dumb." Judy's face turned from an adorable smile to a shocked facial expression.

"Can we just go to our first class already?" Judy said tired of Nick's games... She was too mature for this... What is she talking about she completely loves Nick's jokes... A little bit... Too much. "Whatever you want you fluffy monster." "I told you that, that conversation was over! We both agreed you are more fluffy than I am!"


Time: 4:12 Pm 8/4/2016

The three mammals Nick, Judy, and Aiden sat on a table eating their ice cream happily. The icre cream shop was one of the best of Zootopia's. Good thing it wasn't managed by elephants because it would be troublesome to eat their ice cream while barfing. At least that's how Nick saw it.

There wasn't many mammals at the store, mostly because school ended one hour ago and most of the people who come here are students who just got out of school. Besides that the place wasn't very special... Just good ice cream.

But the only thing that enraged him was the way snowball looked at carrots... It was quite annoying, he knew what that look was... He has it bad for his bunny. And Judy looked at him in a similar way so... There wasn't much to do... But he needed to confirm it at least. "I'm going to the bathroom, excuse me." Nick said as politely as he could... For some reason.

When Nick got out of the bathroom he saw Judy being licked by Aiden...! How was this possible? One day and she lets him lick her!? "What is going on here? Why are you licking Judy!?" Nick didn't put too many thoughts in it... This white wolf was stealing Judy away from him!

"Nick he wasn't licking me, he was just extending his tongue out, because I told him about 'that story.'" Nick quickly understood the reason why but he still felt uncomfortable about snowball, he didn't want him near Judy not for long at least.

After eating their frozen desserts Aiden said it was getting late and he needed to go, leaving Judy and Nick in the ice cream place... "Why do you gotta be so rude to him, he is a very nice mammal, Nick." Nick didn't know why... But is sounded like this to him: 'He is better than you.'

"So you think he is better than me right? Because I haven't been helping you for how long... Let me see I don't know, because I've lost count!" Nick was filled with irrational anger, specially because Judy didn't say anything like that. "No... I don't think he is better than you. I completely love, you as a friend for everything you have done for me until now... And I am grateful for it but just be nicer to him... Please Nick?"

She was making the puppy eyes... And now she is crying... How is she so manipulative? Pretty evil for a bunny.

"you know... I think it's getting pretty late how about you walk me home as a gentlemammal would do?" Nick quickly nodded she wanted her to know that she wanted to do this... "If you insist, of course." Judy rolled her eyes and got her purse and phone from the table they were seated on just a few seconds ago. "And I'll try to be nicer to him." He emphasized the word try.

"Expected from you, slick... Now let's get going." They started walking through the streets, Judy was quite good at giving directions and as they started walking they could see a big number of mammals, there were some fennec foxes hustling rich mammals out of their money, normally rich people thought they could outsmart them... That was far from the truth... As they got closer to Judy's house she couldn't not ask the question... "Are you jealous of Aiden?" This caught Nick off guard, yes he was jealous Judy was giving him so much attention.

"I'm not jealous I just want to spend more time with you, probably we could have gotten to the movies if it wasn't for him... It would have been on my side because I know my bunny doesn't like to pay... Let the dumb fox pay it, right?" Nick was actually saying the truth... Judy didn't like to pay since he has hustled some money out of her, he did it when he was a kid... He swears it was not his fault.

"I don't care about paying, and I'm sorry if you had other plans but think about it Nick... We have to meet new mammals, it can't always be just me and you." Wow... That actually hut a lot. "So you are going to abandon me for some stupid white furred wolf, huh?" Nick has been waiting for an answer for minutes already.

"He is not stupid, you are just hating him because you want me all for yourself... Nick that is not the kind of relationship we have." Judy said with a sad face... How much she would love to be in a relationship with the fox, she knew it was impossible... He would never love her. "Im sorry for being like that, but he just gets so close to you and the way he looks at you... It just... Annoying to me." Nick saw her walk she passed through the street without looking, and there was a car coming her way... Something she didn't saw before thinking about crossing the street... I have to do something

I lunged forward and grabbed Judy by the collar of her shirt and pulled her against me... Which led to her being on top of me, looking me with those beautiful eyes of hers... You just saved her Nick, it's your moment... Do something.

He knew how to do something intimate, but that normally wasn't thought of that way... So he just licked her cheeks, and he accidentally licked one side of her ears... Judy moaned... Nick had a heavy blush thinking about what he just did... "I'm sorry what I just did was very dumb." Nick didn't know what to say... He didn't want this friendship to end here. "Nha it's okay, you dumb foxes." Judy quite enjoyed when he licked her... It felt... Pleasant.

"So... Are you getting off from me or you want to stay there and enjoy the view?" He said with a cocky smile, he knew how to make the bunny angry. "Whatever, let's just keep on walking." And after ten minutes of walk... They were finally there, the Hopps house.

Nick brought her to her doorsteps since he thought that was the nicest way to say bye to her, he waved bye and before he could go... Judy tugged his shirt and put him on her eye level... Then kissed him on the cheek. "That is for saving me, thanks Nick." After that... Nick couldn't help to think that may be he had a chance of being with her.

Just... Wow.


I changed the first project of my story for this... I think the characters feel a little more... Themselves. But I still need more practice and I won't stop until I achieve victory.

I appreciate every kind of review, it would help me improve as a writer and as a person... Depending of what the review is.

Im Khaladan and I'm out I hope you have a nice day!