tris, tobias, and a weird peter

by samlovesreading

Tris is a player, Tobias is depressed and Peter is... well... lets just say he's not who we think he is. What will happen to 4 6 ? Will it hold or will it be 4 6 DISASTER! and what will happen to Uriah? Will he live? This is the first fanfiction I've ever written so don't be too harsh. please please please review at the end of each chapter I want to know how to improve :)

1. The Idea

What if Jeanine never controlled most Dauntless to kill Abnegation? What if that never happened?

Chapter 1

Tris POV

I woke up to the same thought that had kept hitting me for weeks. I am a member of Dauntless! I can't believe it! I felt like doing something brave. I sprinted to Christina's room down the corridor, as I opened the door the sight was like a punch to the stomach…

Tobias POV

I woke up to the same thought that had kept hitting me for weeks. Tris is a member of Dauntless! I can't believe it! I get to be with the love of my life for ever. Will we get married? Then it hit me, "I SHOULD PROPOSE!" I shouted. Unfortunately for me the dauntless walls between rooms are thin so Zeke heard everything I said. He burst into my room and said, "Dude! What!?" his face was covered in shaving cream.

"Umm… Nothing!" I replied in what I hoped was a convincing lie.

"Tell me the truth. You just yelled "I SHOULD PROPOSE! I'm your best friend it's not like I'm going to ignore it."

He has a point.

"Umm. I was thinking of proposing to Tris..."

"THAT'S AMAZING!"

"Really? I mean, yeah of course its amazing! Hey help me pick a ring later ok?"

"Yeah give me a shout. But dude, a dauntless wedding ring? We'll find something."

I was glad that he's gone. He's right. A dauntless wedding ring? A dauntless wedding? A dauntless wedding dress? What am I going to do?

Tris POV

As I opened the door the sight was like a punch to the stomach...

There was Peter, with a gun against Christina's head and a headlock securing Will to his side, his face getting redder by the second. Christina was in tears. No body had seen me yet.

"You stole him Christina, don't try denying it." Peter hissed, practically through his teeth.

"I didn't! I didn't do anything!"

"YOU DID YOU STOLE HIM! WILL WAS MINE! MINE! I HAD HIM THIS CLOSE," he held his fingers up to demonstrate, "AND YOU TOOK IT AWAY FROM ME!" At that note Will's eyes rolled to the back of his head, unconscious.

I couldn't believe it, Peter is gay.

heya guys I'll try upload every day if I can please please please review! thx love u xx

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