me: hola ppls i know i said that i would update yesterday but still i was in NY i had stuff to do but its here now! enjoy!

master: allons-y!

doctor: i can has a disclamiar?

me: you can has a dosclamiar

doctor: she owns nothing

" You know im gonna kill you" I said as we ran for our lives "multiple times"

" same" Ianto and Gwen said trying not to fall

" I figured" jack said smirking

"shut up and RUN!" owen yelled running faster with tosh on his tail

2 years earlier

Narrator pov

Jack, Gwen, and Ianto were in the hub trying to figure out what was wrong with the rift. Jack said the doctor was coming Gwen and Ianto said there was no way he would come there directly he hates torchwood. As they were arguing the TARDIS appeared the door opened and a girl fell out and the TARDIS left as soon as it came. The girl she looked about 23 and she was very pretty she had short bob cut black hair. She was wearing a white tank top with an orange and red sweater with out sleeves and a mini skirt with a pair of South Pole sneakers.

"Hello" she said her voice was beautiful " is this torchwood?" she asked

"Yes this is" jack said " was that…?"

" The doctor yes" jack turned to smile brightly at his team

" You'll explain what your doing here in a minute go sit at the table" he said the girl, Ianto, and Gwen sat down

"You want anything tea? Chips?"

She smiled "yes please, Earl Gray"

"Sugar"

" Six please" jack made the sickly sweet tea while his team stared at the girl

" So what's your name?" Gwen asked trying to be nice

"My name is ale-err um I mean chi"

Jacks eyes widened as he dropped the tea but Ianto caught it and gave it to the girl who took a sip and closed her eyes in bliss

"Were you about to say Alexis? As in Alexis smith? As in my favorite neighbor from 3 years ago"

"Ummm yes long time no see" the other two remain quite so they can watch.

"Well what do u need you were always my favorite neighbor"

"Umm Jack I know what you and your friends are"

Jacks smile faded what are you talkin about ale-"

"Stop calling me that please" chi interrupted him getting up to go to his side of the table "it brings back bad unwanted memories from that name its chi ok"

She was practically sitting on top of him her chest was on his and he like the softness he felt there. Without thinking he pulled her down on his lap

"Sorry Alexis what do you mean by you know what we are" he asked an prayed she was dead wrong

"Well you jacks are from the 51st century and you hunt aliens with Ianto, Gwen, Tosh, and Owen"

Jack didn't know what to say but Ianto diffidently did

"Well, well, well" Ianto says, " What have we got here one of jack's old toys" he guessed chi face went blank

Alexis/chi pov

I made my face go blank when I turned to look at him instead of listening to his thoughts I sang a song it was Ocean Avenue by yellow card .I was furious so I sang wile he cursed me out. I got to " if I could find you now things would get better" when Ianto says " your nothing more than a common street WHORE looking for money"

I really tried to keep my temper but I lost it my eyes turned blood red and my hair burst into flames I was over to Ianto in a second my voice was still perfectly sweet but kin was talking through me " if you ever call me a whore aging I will kill you and personally tell daddy to banish you to the deepest depths of hell DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME" I screamed the ending part at him no one can ever call me a whore I would rip out his throat and eat it. Who did he think he was? he nodded his head to indicate he understand my hair deflated and my eyes went back to its normal color which was VERY dark brown to humans and black to family and supernatural

I let go of his shirt wondering when I grabbed it in the first place I took a step away from him and tried to calm down. I was mentally kicking myself for blowing my cover. I waited for two full minutes before anyone said something

"Wait" Jack asked, "Did you say DADDY?" Sigh,

" Yes, yes I did"

"Don't you think we deserve an explanation? Who are you? And why did the doctor drop you here?" Gwen asked sigh

"Yup come on kiddies its story time"

for thoes of you who read the old story how do you like the renevations for thoes of you just reading this what do you think? you likey or no likey r&r pwease