This is my first lemon so be nice when you review but constructive criticism is welcome as well.Disclamier :I do not own hmc except this story.
WARNING THIS FANFIC IS NOT FOR ANYONE UNDER THE AGE OF 15 SO THAT'S WHY IT'S RATED M ALTHOUGH NOW IT IS RATED T IT WILL ESCELATE TO M BY ABOUT THE NEXT CHAPTER SO ENJOY WHILE YOU CAN FOR THOSE WHO ARE UNDER 15 BUT WARNING TO ALL AS WHEN IT IS IN THE THIRD OR FORTH CHAPTER IT WILL BE RATED MA BUT SINCE YOUR NOT ALLOWED TO PUBLISH MA RATED FICTION I WILL BE POSTING IT AT MEDIAMINER BUT MORE THAN LIKELY AT AFF.
This is after the movie as they are getting married and have to cope with the good times and the bad.
Sophie's pov.
"Sophie , Sophie" letty called out only to come out and see her working around the flower shop on a beautiful day which was also the morning of the wedding so that surprised letty and ran up to Sophie and asked why was she working around the flower shop when it was her wedding day and she should be getting ready but Sophie calmly said "well letty working puts my nerves at bay and I enjoy arranging flowers so I thought it would be good if I did the flowers so I let the decoration team off early so they could be with their family's on such a sunny day and I invited them over to the wedding mostly because I think it is important for people to see that he is not a monster but a very kind loyal gentleman and I thought if people noticed that it would make him happy because he never had many people in his life so I thought it would be perfect" , after letty heard Sophie say that she said to Sophie "you really love him don't you" after a few seconds Sophie replied "yes he is like no one I ever met he really is that wonderful". Just then Sophie's mother came in with a big grin on her face and said that she has a surprise and someone was waiting outside to see her so Sophie went out side and it was no other than prince Justin waiting with a diamond pendent had the top designers wedding dress with a box of the richest chocolates while Justin was waiting he seemed to be solemn until he turned around and saw the woman of his dreams and instantly his face brightened up until he was shocked to feel two arms around him and someone whispering in his ear "thanks so much for coming here and surprising me like this" when he noticed who it was he felt his heart jump and had the urge to hug her but he knew better as it was her wedding day and it would better if he did not because it might give the wrong messages away but instead he placed a hand on her back and said your welcome. While howl was still asleep across town he was recovering from his stag party although he did not know a lot of people he still had some friends even if they did not know that he was howl mostly because not many people saw howl and thank goodness rumours do not have eyes. While Sophie had a very traditional get together with her sister and mother and a few of the women that worked in the hat shop which also included the witch of the waste while on the other hand howl was at the Eves Of Venus with his stag party. While Sophie has getting ready in the house prince Justin was just getting his automobile since he was going to be bringing the witch of the waste and Sophie with her mother to the wedding which was going to be held at the castle in front of royalty. Sophie walked out of the house and said this is where my life finally begins with Howl.
So guys what do you think should I continue or not and also could you review .