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Sara Sidle was one hell of a woman.Her work was her life,but,recently,she felt that there must be something better than being a CSI.She paced nervously in the lab,waiting for the results from a homicide.
'Greg,have you got those results back yet?God,you're so useless!,'she snapped,growing more impatient by the second.
'I won't have them back for another 15 minutes,so please stop asking every minute or so.'
'Sorry.It's.........just..........nothing',she apologized,wishing she hadn't snapped at him.
'Sara I'm not stupid.I know when something's up with you.'
'Well..........I don't know how to put it................I-'
'Listen,if you don't want to tell me,that's fine,but I think you'd feel a lot better if you let it all out.'
'Ok,I'll tell you,but you've got to swear to me............swear on your life.............that you won't tell a soul',she whispered,making sure that no one was anywhere near them.'
'Ok,Ok.Look if this is about you and Grissom,I don't want to be like the agony aunt here,especially if you two are having problems.'
'Well.........'
'Ok,just tell me anyway.I won't tell anyone.I promise.'
Sara shifted around on her seat uneasily,hoping for someone to pop their head through the door to tell her something about the case,so that she would get out of telling Greg,but no one came.
'Ok.I'll just say it.'
'I.........we..........I'm...........pregnant',she mumbled,sounding like she was scared of those words.
'What the hell?!Oh my God!!!!!!!!',Greg yelled,trying to contain himself,but doing a very crappy job.
'Please shut up!!!!!!!!Just shut up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'Sara screamed.
It was obvious that they had caused a bit of a scene,and some people in the surrounding offices started to stare.Sara and Greg had picked a bad time to start yelling,because,just then,Grissom walked down the corridor.He had been in his office,and went outside to see what the noise was.
'Is everything OK here?I heard shouting.What's the matter?Are you OK Sara?'
'Y....Yeah I.....I'm fine.I just.......'
'Are you sure?'Grissom asked,eyeing Greg up and down.
Not many things can piss off Gil Grissom,but if something ever happened to Sara...............he didn't know what he'd do.
Grissom left a few minutes later.
'Thanks for that........that was great going Greg!'she said,trying to keep her voice down.
'I'm sorry.It's just a kind of.....well.......shock.I mean you.A mother?Is it Grissom's?'
'Of course it is!'
'So how does he feel?'he enquired,getting quite curious,but cautious at the same time.He didn't want Sara to bite his head off again.
'Feel about what?'she quipped,trying not to know what he was talking about.
'Well the baby of course.'
'God,keep your voice down',she whispered,looking extremely anxious.
'Don't dodge the question.'
'How am I supposed to know how he feels about it?'
'Well.......'Greg paused for a second,looking puzzled........'You...you haven't told him yet!'
'Well........I.......no.'suddenly,Sara's eyes started to well up.Then,the tears on her cheekturned into a flood.
'It's OK.He'll understand',he said,putting his arm around her shoulder.
'I don't want to be a single mother,working nights,with no one to look after my baby..........'
'Just tell him,Sara.It'll be OK.'
And with that,Sara wiped her tears on her sleeve and headed towards Grissom's office.

To be continued.................