This is my first fanfic so plz R&R so I know how to continue this story and let me know how I can improve thx!
MLPOV
I ran upstairs to my room in despair, tears running down my face, and I didn't say hi to my sisters or Mark. I knew that the others would have wondered what had happened when I was stargazing just a few minutes ago to make me spontaneously cry, but I couldn't face anyone right now, especially not my soulmate Ash. Knowing the disappointment and disgust that he and the others would have when I would tell them was unbearable, especially when the secret was enough to turn them away from me for the rest of my life.
I kept breathing irregular until I arrived at my room with no interruptions. Incredible rage filled my blood and I slammed the door so hard I thought that it would come off its hinges. I knew that if I didn't calm down soon, then they would know something was wrong, so I slowly slid down the door bursting into tears and curled my hands into my red puffy face to smother the cries so that they couldn't hear. Mare what's wrong? I knew that in that instinct even if I tried to hide my emotions from everyone, the one person I couldn't convince was ash. Please Mare talk to me, even from the Circle Daybreak base I can ear your cries. You know you crying make me regret coming here in the first place… do you want me to come back?
As soon as he said this I immediately protested, no! I'm fine honestly someone from school upset me today and I'm over it now…just stay th-
Ash stopped me mid sentence saying Mare, you should know that you are my soulmate and you cannot hide anything from me and if you really don't want me to come back then I won't as long as you tell me what is wrong.
I…I…can't you will hate me
You know that I could never hate you my love. Immediately after he said this, a crash came through the window and glass sparked everywhere, grazing my skin. Mare! Mare, speak to me!
APOV
The connection was broken and my heart started beating at such an irregular pace and was unusual even for a vampire. What had just happened? Is Mare alright? God, I hope so. I sat in my hotel room for several minutes trying to piece together what had happened and trying to rationally answer so many questions, when I was shook back to reality. A loud knock on the door pierced my hearing and went through my whole body. "Ash it's me Thierry….Ash open up its really important! Ash it's about Mary-Lynette!!" I glanced at the clock with worry, oh no! I was sitting talking to myself for a few hours! Mary-Lynette could be dead now and it's my entire fault. Realising that Thierry was banging at the door constantly, I raced to it with inhuman speed and socked to find that Thierry was standing with Hannah in the doorway looking distressed. "Come in" I said to them, hoping that it was some good news about my mare. Unfortunately my luck had ran out ever since I left her and I sat patiently listening to what Kestrel, Jade and Rowan had told them on the phone. My mind started wandering not really believing that this had really happened and I immediately froze when Thierry glanced at Hannah worriedly and said the three words I hoped no-one wouldn't have had to say ever. "Mary-Lynette's been kidnapped"
My eyes turned blood red with anger "kidnapped? How could she have been kidnapped when three vampires and an overprotective brother look after her?"
Thierry stared again at Hannah but this time she spoke "we don't know but we think from what Kestrel, Jade and Rowan have said that she was crying about something and locked herself in her room and they couldn't get to her in time to save her. We are so sorry Ash; whatever you want to do we will help because we know exactly how you feel."
"How could you know how I feel? At least you knew who took Hannah…I don't even know that much"
"Don't worry we will find her" Thierry said trying to reassure me but unsuccessfully.
Tears were running down my face uncontrollably and normally I can withstand from crying but not when it comes to my mare. Mare where are you? Please tell me somehow!!!