Hi this is chapter one off many others please send me a review of what you thought but you wont have an answer back till the 12th as I will be on holiday

CHAPTER 1

Hi I am evil as hell and I will tell you a story of horror and mystery. This isn't a story for those with faint hearts only those that reads death and murder stories.

Well lets get started if you didn't heed my warning you have one last chance. No? Ok then lets start

Our story starts back in 1979 when 4 teens went on a camping trip, the teen were called Nicolas or nick for short he was 17 tall and had short ginger hair with blue eyes, James was 16 tall with black spiked hair and hazel eyes, Emma or em for short was 15 tall, with long brown hair with green eyes and Jessica or jess was 17 tall had long blonde hair with blue eyes.

They decided to go camping in the nearest forest to look for the abanded gold shaft what holds mountains of gold and a terrible secret, the teens were only going on this trip because one of the group members were leaving and they wanted to go on a camping trip as a good bye gift. Only to find out that none of them will ever leave that forest again, well in that century anyway.

James, em and jess went over to nicks to pick him up then headed off, after about a mile they turned in to a over grown field. Which on the other side lay the forest which no one had entered since the supposed cave in.

"Hurry up James you don't want to lag behind in this part of the field," joked nick

who was 30km ahead of James with the girls

"Why" shouted James,

"Why James? Haven't your parents ever told you that anyone that goes near this forest disappears," answered nick.

Unknowingly that a four legged creature creped behind James with drool dripping from its large teeth, ready to pounce on its prey.