Disclaimer: I do not own Treasure Planet! Add in all the other disclaimer stuff... I do however own all my original characters.
This is my first fan fiction so I'm kinda nervous! Please review and give advice if you have any! Also let me know if I need to spice it up or if I'm wasting my time! Happy reading and hope you enjoy! :)
I'm also afraid I just totally stink at this, and people won't understand my story... soooo I hope I'm being stupid and you love it!
I still can't fathom that such an epic adventure happened to me, Jim Hawkins. The boy that everyone thought was going to end up in intergalactic jail or on a pirate ship. Don't get me wrong, being a pirate was something I once dreamed of becoming, but after the journey I took five years ago, I much prefer a legal occupation that allows me to live up to my full potential. A very persuasive man once told me I would shine like a star, and I think I found my path to that brightness.
Yesterday I was officially named a Nova Officer of the Royal Navy, and I am unfortunately suffering a major headache from the multiple drinks I had at the celebration last night. It also doesn't help that today is my first day of legitimate duty. I guess they don't believe in days off at this level.
"Raise and shine you wonderous super official you!" B.E.N comes crashing into the room balancing a giant breakfast in his arms.
I throw a pillow at him. "Go away B.E.N! I can't function if you continue to yell in my face."
"Oh sorry Jimmy sir! But you gotta get up! Don't want to lose track of time and be late to your first day of work. You know I was late this one time..."
I zone him out as I roll to my side and practically fall out of bed. The room spins a little bit as I struggle to get my uniform on. I look in the mirror, and I look sleepish. However I look happier then I did four years ago before my excursion to Treasure Planet. My hair is shorter but still in its signature messy style. My muscles are more define, I'm taller, and my face looks more mature.
"…and then he threatened to sell my parts to make a roboshark, whatever that is!
"Hey that's great B.E.N, but have you seen my medal for my uniform around? I can't find it."
"Oh I think I saw Morph playing with it a bit ago. You know that little guy? Likes the shiny things!"
"Wonderful!" I run out of my room in search of Morph. I don't have time for this; there is no way I'm going to make it to work in time now. I guess a perk is that it will be hard for everyone to forget my name; that or they will call me late boy…
"SHHHHIIIIT! MORPH!"
My mom is standing at the bottom of the stairs blocking my way to the exit.
"Jim! I thought you finally learned to be punctual at the Academy. Oh and your welcome. I retrieved your metal back from the pink thief, and it wasn't easy. At least I got my cardio in for the day."
"I must have missed that lesson, but one thing I do know is that YOU are the best. I owe you one! Thanks mom!"
With super-speed I snatch the medal out of her hands and slip past her. Abruptly I stop half way through the door, and I quickly turn around. I engulf her in my arms.
"Thanks for believing in me mom."
"I love you Jim. I am so proud"
There is a tiny moment of silence, but she breaks it almost immediately. "Now go because I won't be proud anymore if you get fired on your first day!"
We both laugh and I almost trip as I run to my glider. I just keep reminding myself that this is just the beginning.
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