Hey! This is my very first fanfic! Yey for me =D
Ok and now about the story… hmmm. Right now this story can take any turn; it totally depends on how I feel when I continue this. You, who take your time to review, can also influence me ;D. Maybe I'll be inspired. I think it maybe evolve into a yaoi later on.
Please tell me if I have made spelling or grammar mistakes, or just comment on how I write the story. I really want to improve my writing skills. I will try my best not to have any grammar or spelling mistakes, but I'm from not from UK or US (I'm from Sweden) so I can't guarantee it.
A surprise?
Prologue:
It was a nice afternoon. A teen named Atemu hurried down the streets of Domino. He seemed stressed. As he hurried along the street, he had to block various attempts to stop him. There were a lot of people who wanted to have his autograph, he got a lot of attention from being the King of games, but he politely excused himself and continued along the street.
"I really have to get home quick", he thought, "or else will aibou worry. I never told him were I was going"
He sighed and tried to speed up the pace.
Across town, the boy named Yuugi entered his home, the Kame Game Shop. He was beet, the early morning and the long school day had taken its tool on him.
"Granpa!" he called, "I'm home!"
"Welcome back!" answered the old man, whose voice seemed to come from the storage room.
"Need any help Granpa?" Yuugi asked.
"No thanks, I will be out in a moment" answered his grandfather.
After a while came the small old man out of the storage with a couple of boxes in his arms. He put them down on the counter and turned to his grandson.
"So how was your day?"
"Ok, I guess"
"You look tired
"Mmm" he agreed and let out a yawn. "By the way, where's Atemu? Shouldn't he be helping you in the shop today?" he asked and looked around for his friend, the former spirit of the Millennium Puzzle.
"He asked if he could get the afternoon off", answered Sugoroku Mutou with a cheerful smile.
"Did he say were he was going?"
"No. I asked but he said it was a secret."
Yuugi looked surprised; his friend rarely had secrets from him. He frowned and told his grandfather that he would go up to his room and work on some of his homework.
When he came up to his room, he looked around.
"It's a big mess in here", he thought looking around the room where clothes, books and games among many other things was spread out on the floor. The things also covered both the desk and bed. He sighed and wondered how he would be able to get anything done when his room looked like this.
In the end he gave up every attempt to clean it up and threw down the things on his bed on the floor and fell asleep.
Atemu panted, he had run the last part of the way home. He was really late and he regretted it. He hadn't thought it would take this long. His plan had originally been to be home before his aibou, but now he was probably home already. He wanted to surprise Yuugi, but to do that he would rather have tried to keep these errands a secret as long as possible. Now he coursed how curios his aibou could be. Now there would be endless questions about where he had been this afternoon. But it couldn't be helped.
He stepped into the house and took of his jacket and shoes as quietly he could. He tried to sneak up the stairs, but was stopped by Sugoroku's voice.
"Where have you been? ", he asked.
Atemu slowly turned around to face the old man. "I had some errands I had to do", he answered.
"May I ask what kind of errands?"
"Is Yuugi home yet?"
"Yes he's asleep. Why?"
"It's a surprise for him, but please don't tell him", Atemu looked pleadingly at Yuugi's grandfather.
Sugoroku smiled. "That enough information for me. He's up in his room; he said he had some homework to work on."
"Ok, thanks", said Atemu and smiled back.
He went up the stairs and knocked on Yuugi's door. There was no answer.
"Strange", he thought and opened the door.
"Aibou?" he said and looked around the room. First he couldn't spot his friend among all the things, but then he saw that something moved on the bed. Atemu moved closer to find his aibou soundly asleep. He smiled to himself; Yuugi looked so innocent when he was asleep.
For a while, he just stood beside the bed and looked at his friend with affection. He left the boy's room as quietly as he could, not wanting to disturb the boy.
As he came out in the hallway, he closed the door slowly and went back downstairs to tell Sugoroku that his grandson had fallen asleep.
