disclamor i do not own any characters of naruto, but i will have my own oc in this way later in the story..mABE idk yet. or she might come early i would like your predictions on the story and or like and rate and comment or whatever. ^_^ plz...and yes this is my first story sorry it took me so long to take it off of paper for few who know.

...OH BTW THIS TAKES AFTER THE MANGA PAGE 615CH

and when i do this ~ and the name behind it is the person who said it.

NARUTO&HINATA~ At war with Ten tails

"ready hinata?.. lets go"~naruto

"hai! Naruto-kun"~hinata.

Naruto let go of her hand and did multi shadow clone jutsu."bushin no jutsu!" and with that he extended the nine tials power to all his friends. once agian old hinatas hand they ran and jumped up high in the air.

"BUAKUGAN!"~Hinata activated her pro.

`wow i cant belive how my buakugan is so powerfull now.'

"RASANGON!"~Naruto started to form.

everyone elts fallowed tenten, sakara, lee, choji, kakashi, iruka, and more all jumped and formed ther mostpowerfull jutsu and before the tentails relise everyone was in the air heading triat tword him about to attack. everyone striked at once but the taintails let out a ginormous roawr and forced everyone back smashing on the ground. most struggled to get up some dint even get up at all because they were knocked out by the impact. naruto still holding hinatas hand got up and helped her up. he created two more shaddow clones. one grabbed hinatas other hand and narutos hand.

"hinata hang on!"~naruto.

Hinata looked at him in confution then she relised she was being launched back in the air. the ten was still roawring but with less impulse. naruto recreated the rasangan but as a shurikin in the same hand hes holding hinatas. she activated her buakugan agian and the rasangan aborbing more chakra from buakugan creating the masive tense chakra as the flew into the tentails mouth they both shouted "BUAKURAIN! SHURIKIN!" Tentails closed his mouth.

"Heh heh heh"~the tentails chuckled.

shikimaru got mad and strained himself creating the biggest shaddow possestion jutsu with the ninestails chakara and possesed the ten tails he couldnt move. everyone elts reformed the best moves to attack at sinc again.

naruto and hinata are falling threw the throut holding the chakara needed for the buakurain shurikin.

"hinata! can u fined th-"~naruto

"already did"~hinata

"great, lead"~naruto

hinata and naruto raised the buakurain shirikin for more impact and hit the heart strait on. everyone elts on the other side hit at the same time again and the tentails seased, bloated up and chrystalized over into stone. everyone screamed and shouted in victory as the beast started to decenigrate in ash.

Shikamaru fell in (out of noware)came up and set his head on her lap. tears started rolling out of her eyes. shikamaru opened his eyes still weak and saw her.

"what a pain...dont cry ill be fine."~Shikamaru

"...i know''~Temari...

well thats the end of chapter1 hoped u like it. its gunna be a naruhinaXx nad a side of others. i need to know who u want me to pair, tho im already gunna pair Temari with Shikamaru bc im a Shikamaru fan...

shika~"you are are ya?"

me~"shika-kun..uhh.. i dint know u were here."

shika~''well, i am what u gunna do about it?''

me~''uhh...(blush)''

shika~''hhmmmh...(grabs me by the hand and pulls me ina notherroom) shell finish the next chapter when we come back"

everyone~(domfoundent)