Hello Everyone! I am a super fan of the Twilight Saga. I am trying to write a sequel to Breaking Dawn. And I hope that you would like it.
DISCLAIMER: I am not Stephanie Meyer and I do not own the copyright of the Twilight saga. And I do not intend to make a profit out of it. I am just a crazy fan, and this is just for fun.
After reading Breaking Dawn, I always wondered about Renesmee's story. So, I imagined a chain of events that might occur in her life.
My story starts six years after the end of Bella's story. I am thinking of a few possible plots, but your suggestions and criticism would really help me make the story better.
Read on!
THE INCEPTION
CHAPTER 1: The Family
I really miss mom and dad. I thought to myself. I didn't realize but I was playing with my locket absent-mindedly. My mom gifted me the locket when I was a baby before I was about to get killed. I pushed those thoughts out of my mind. And I looked on my right, at the window. I could see my reflection on the window pane. I look a lot like my dad. I have his hair and skin, but I have my mom's eyes.
It has been a few months, since they moved to Hanover. They got into Dartmouth once again. They didn't want to go but Granddad assured him that it has to happen. They have to live apart from me now or later. Since then, I moved into my dad's old room in Granddad's house. Whenever I miss my parents I go to the cottage and sit by myself in my old room. At times, Jacob and I would visit Grandpa. It was a nice place where mom spent her last human years.
Just to get the melancholy out of my mind, I switched on the music system and it began playing Debussy. I shared my passion for music with my dad. He left hi entire collection for me to listen. I miss those days when he used to play the piano for me. I liked the lullaby the most. It was inspired from my mom, he once told me.
Just then, a knock on the door pulled me out of my chain of thoughts. It was Aunt Alice.
"Yes? Aunt Alice?" I asked.
"Nessie, would you like to come with me to Olympia? I thought it's time we should go shopping for the school." Aunt Alice said, enthusiastically. Shopping and Aunt Alice were like best buddies.
"Yeah, I'll come", I replied. I wasn't much of a fan of shopping. I think I got that from my mom. But I had to go, as she was shopping for me and Aunt Rosalie had gone hunting with Uncle Emmett and Grandma Esme.
I grabbed my new Dolce & Gabbana jacket. This would make Aunt Alice happy, since she had bought that one for me from her last visit to Seattle. I switched off the music system and I followed Aunt Alice to the Living room. Granddad and Uncle Jasper were watching television in the living room. They turned around before we appeared, they obviously had heard us coming down.
"So? On your way shopping, huh!", Granddad stated. Everyone knew Aunt Alice so well. It was always a chore going out on shopping with her. She would take eons to shop and then she shops almost for an entire county.
Uncle Jasper must have guessed what I was thinking. Just when Aunt Alice wasn't looking his way, he mouthed, "She won't be a trouble today. Even, she wants to return early."
"And why is that?", I whispered.
"Oh, You will know", he answered, fighting a smile.
"Have a nice time!", Granddad exclaimed.
"Yeah, we will", Aunt Alice replied. I waved at them. She led me to the garage.
"Which one are we driving today? The old Porsche or your new Bugatti?", I asked uninterested.
"Is it a question to ask? Of course, the Bugatti. The newer, the better", she replied looking at me in indignation.
Aunt Alice got into the driver's seat of her new red Bugatti. She got it as a present after she and Uncle Jasper finished their college at Yale.
She opened the door at the passenger's seat and I got in. I drove the car past the woods and now we were on the highway.
"Aunt Alice? I was wondering about me going to the school", I said.
"And?", she persuaded.
I pursed my lips and then I said," I haven't talked to Jacob about it. I mean, he's my best friend and he has a right to know".
"Oh, he is okay with it. Actually, he talked to Edward about it and he supports your father's decision", she replied, giving me a quick glance.
"That's cool." But, I still wanted to talk to Jacob. It was the first time he had been away from me. And it bothered me in a way.
With Aunt Alice at the driver's seat, we reached Olympia within an hour or so. The next hour went by, while she bought a chic Prada backpack for me. I wondered how long will it last considering my carelessness. She walked through many shops, buying some clothes for me. I gave her my inputs every now and then. I wanted to blend in and I didn't want to look like a model from the runway. We found a book shop where we bought my books. When we were done, it was around six in the evening. She took me to a restaurant, where I grabbed a hotdog. Being a vampire's daughter, my diet primarily consisted of animal blood. But on practice, I could also eat normal human food. I finished my hotdog and we got in the car.
"So what's the hurry in returning home?", I asked, sounding disinterested.
"There's no hurry. Why? Do you want something else?"
"No, I just remembered Uncle Jasper saying something about you wanting to come home early."
"Oh, yes. It's just that Rose wants me to redo her wardrobe."
I was even more suspicious than I was before. "Oh, I see". I let it drop.
Just when Aunt Alice began to drive, my cell phone rang from the pocket of my jacket. I fished it out and saw Jacob's name flashing on it. I picked up the phone.
"Hey, Ness. What's up?", he said in his raspy voice.
"I am just on my way home. I am out shopping with Aunt Alice in Olympia", I replied.
"Okay. So, all set to go to school?"
"Yeah, I am. I miss you. When will you be back?", I asked. I heard a throaty laugh.
"I'll be back by this Sunday. Rachel and Paul are giving me a hard time already. You know I just can't stand him. I miss you too", he replied. Rachel was an Economics professor at the Washington State University. Jacob was dragged to Pullman by Paul and Billy to visit her there.
"Ok. I'll see you then. Say hi to Rachel, Paul and Billy"
"Yeah, I will," he hung up.
We arrived home and Aunt Alice parked her car in the garage. We walked to the living room. Just then, I realized that Mom and Dad were standing on my either side.
"Don't forget that unlike you guys, I do have a heart", I gasped.
"Yes, I know. But you are as immortal as we are," Mom retorted.
"I am so glad to see you here. I have been missing you so much", I beamed.
"I know, sweetheart. I missed you too", she said. Then she looked at me sideways, she added, "Hey, you are almost two inches taller than me. Wow".
"Love you, dear. How on earth did you believe that we won't see you before you joined the high school?", he said incredulously. "Well, that reminds me of the gift we have got for you", Dad added.
"That gift has little to do with me", Mom pointed out. "I wanted to give you something that you'd really like. Books would have been perfect. But your dad said that this has to be special, and I relented", she added.
"Besides, she has read most of the books that the English and American literature has to offer. Would you come with me now, so that I can show you the gift?", Dad persuaded.
I nodded. He led me to the door and at the entrance stood my gift. It was a red Mercedes convertible. At that first sight, I loved it.
"Honey, it's nothing ostentatious. And your mother approved it too", my dad said in persuasion.
"Dad, it's amazing. I loved it", I squeaked.
"Yeah, it's beautiful", Aunt Alice added. I just forgot that the others were still there, when we were so lost in our little reunion.
Just a few weeks ago, Uncle Jasper had got my birth-certificate and my other documents fabricated by J. Jenks in Seattle. Mom had warned Uncle Jasper on the phone not to scare him again. My story to the public was the same one, which my dad had formulated a few years ago. I was supposed to be Edward Cullen's niece. My father, Edward Cullen's brother died with his wife in a car accident. I grew up in Minnesota with my parents before they died. Five years ago, when the Cullens found me, Edward Cullen adopted me.
It was night when my parents kissed me good night and left for the cottage. I didn't realize when I fell asleep. The next morning was sunny bright. Aunt Alice wanted to go out on a picnic at the clearing. The hours drifted with my happy family around. The idea of a picnic was a bit different for a vampire family. My dad played the guitar and sung his favorite songs, with everybody singing along. Mom arm wrestled with Uncle Emmett and lost twice out of three. Dad reminded her that she was no more a newborn. We then, ran along the Mount Rainier. I camped with Grandma Esme, while the others hunted. As I grew up, I wasn't comfortable with the idea of hunting. Also, I had an alternative, so I chose the human way. It was something Granddad would have done, if he were at my place. All the time, I wondered what Jacob was doing. He was easy to be with. Later in the evening, I went with Aunt Alice and Uncle Jasper to see off my parents at the Port Angeles airport.
When we got home, Aunt Rose had cooked dinner for me. She knew exactly what I liked. I really loved her grilled chicken with mushroom sauce. I must say, I have a great family and they baby me too much. But, honestly I love it. I am really lucky to have them. I was tired after the hiking, so I excused myself and I went into my room. I changed my clothes and I sat on my bed, not sure what to do. I was too preoccupied with my thoughts to sleep. My family was once human. And a few of them still are. Grand Dad once told me about their existence and the existence of the vulnerable ones, the humans. The humans I knew, like Grandpa and Sue knew somewhat about my truth. So, getting to know those humans who were oblivious about our existence would be difficult. Either I might hurt someone or I might do something to make them suspicious. I would have to learn to blend in. A low groaning sound broke my train of thoughts. And there he was, sitting beside me on the bed. He wore a beige linen shirt and an old pair of jeans.
"Jacob! You came." I almost shouted in surprise.
"Of course, I did. Once I stepped into Forks, I had to meet you." He said matter-of-factly. I smiled and I said, "I am glad."
He appraised me for a few seconds and said, "What are you worried about? You'll be great in school. A schmuck like me can handle it, so why can't you?" I touched his cheeks with my hands, and I thought about all the things I was thinking about before he came. He smiled and said, "You know you wouldn't hurt anyone. And I haven't met anyone who doesn't like you. So stop worrying in vain."
I couldn't help but smile. Jacob was my best friend. He would say all the right things at the right time. "Okay. I won't." I surrendered.
"I think I should go now. Your father knows that I am here, but he really doesn't like the idea."
"But you would never hurt me. Why does he object to you being here?" I replied puzzled.
To this, he pursed his lips fighting a smile. He just said, "I will see you in the morning. Good night."
"Good Night." And then, he disappeared through the window in a fraction of seconds.
Forgive me if I made any mistakes. But do point them out. I am writing a piece of fiction for the first time. I am looking forward to read the reviews. Tell me if I should write the next chapter. I do have a plot in mind.
