Ok so I'm not really re-writing but making more in depth on another writers story. The writer who wrote original of this story is Auslly2getha4eva check them out!
Ally is sitting behind the counter at her Dad's store Sonic Boom she looks up as her best friend Trish walks through the front door.
"Hey Ally!" She says with a giant smile plastered on her face. "Hey Trish ! why are you so happy? Is it another new job?" Ally said trying not to giggle at the joke she thought was the most hilarious thing ever. Trish scofted "No. Guess who got invited to an awesome boat party!?" she says putting her hands up in her signature position. "Oprah?" Ally says with as much sarcasm as she can. "No silly me! And your coming with me!" Se said starting to jump up and down in excitement. Ally got excited for a moment but then her face fell. "Trish I can't I have to work." She smiled even bigger. "No you don't! I talked to your Dad you have the rest of the week off!" She said jumping once more. " What are your serious!" Ally said finally jumping excitedly with her best friend. Trish nodding excitedly "Oh my gosh! That's awesome! When do we leave?" Ally said when she finally stopped jumping. "Tonight so go get ready! I will pick you up at 8!" Trish said and then quickly dashed out the door. Ally sighed and shook her head at her over excited best friend she waited for the last of the customers to check out and leave then locked up and hurried home to get ready.
With Austin and Dez
"Dude I don't want to go." Austin whined to his crazy friend. "Come on dude! This girl I like is going to be there and I'm not going alone!" He whined back. Austin groaned " Ugh! Fine I'll go with you!" he said giving up on this argument. "Yes!...Maybe Ally will be there." Dez said with a smirk. Austin looked away dreamily for a moment. "Yea I hope…wait what no I don't care." He said trying to regain his cool. "You sooo like her!" Dez taunted "No! I don't!" Austin all but yelled. "Dude I know you like her. You stare at her all the time!" He said rubbing in that he is way to out in the open in his crushing. Austin stared at the floor "Not all the time." He mumbled blushing slightly. "So why not ask her out?" Dez said stating the obvious. "Because we are two different types of popular she is beauty and social popular. And I'm band popular."He said his expression dropping by the word. "Yea so?" Dez said not getting the point as usual. "Plus she dated our friend Dallas and he likes to mess with her ever since she broke up with him." His face twisting with an unreadable expression. "Oh yea…. But you do like her right?" Dez said finally understanding SOMETHING in this conversation. "Well…Yea but she doesn't like me so whatever." Austin said with a huff of frustration. "Ok so are you ready to go?" Dez said excited once more to get going. "Yea I guess." Austin said in an even less excited mood to go any where. "Sweet! Come on lets go!" Dez said shoving Austin out the door. "I hope nothing goes wrong." He mumbled.