I have decided to rewrite this story, and all of my other ones that I took down because I was reading them and thought, holy cow, this is a piece of shit! Know I won't be updating as frequently as I used to (well this story I will because I have already rewritten most of it).
It will not be the same as the previous one. I have changed it so it makes more sense and is much more exciting. I have also revamped Zammie, and tried to make the characters fit the plot more. It is kind of the same plot, but with more twist and more Bex, Macey, and Liz. The second chapter will be coming ASAP depending on the reviews.
Chapter 1
Cammie's POV
"Eli, leave NOW!" My voice was strained, and sounded worn down.
"Cammie," I heard his sob echo through the room. It bounced off the wall making it sound so much louder than it actually was. It made my head throb more than it already was.
I felt another blow to my head, but I was already numb. I was way past feeling the pain. I heard a crack, and knew it was my rib cage. Something was telling me that I wouldn't be walking anytime soon.
My dad had never been the fatherly type. He was aggressive, he always had been. I never could understand what my mom saw him, why she even wanted to marry him. Before it was my mom who had been his victim, but ever since he killed her I was next in line. Sure, it wasn't just me, he tried to hurt Eli, but I always got in the way. He was seven and I was sixteen, he was so little and so innocent.
I felt a swift kick to my stomach and could feel the blood trickling down my face. But then it all stopped. I felt his presence before could see him. I looked into a pair of piercing blue eyes. They gave away absolutely nothing. There was no pain or hatred in them. They were completely emotionless. That was what scared me the most.
"You understand why I have to do this right? You have no respect, you don't listen, you are just like your mother," His voice was sinister. I watched as he leaned back on his heels and reached behind him.
My world started spinning as I saw a gun come out of my dad's back pocket. This is it, I thought, this is it. He pointed it at me, his face blank.
"I really wish I didn't have to do this," Bullshit, I thought silently.
"I hate you," I gasped out "I hate you so much,"
That wasn't a lie. Maybe I felt something seeing him this way, I wanted what he couldn't be. But I had gotten past that fact, and when he killed the most important thing to me, well there was no way I could learn to love him.
He didn't respond, instead I heard the gun go off, but I never felt the bullet. When I opened my eyes, I watched as my seven year old brother collapsed on me screaming out in pain.
Joe and Zach will be next chapter!
Let's say at least 15 reviews? And tell me if you think just this first chapter is already better. And don't worry, from now on the chapters will be longer, and in the next two I will explain Cammie's past, and what her life was like.