This is a poem about the couple Ryou and Bakura. In case you can't figure it out, Bakura died and Ryou decides to commit suicide to reach him. This has angst. Also, I feel as though the start of this poem is really weak. Could you please help me fix it up? I like the middle part (when the lines get longer) and then I'm not too sure I need the last stanza. So could you please help me??? I'm begging!

I do not own YGO.

The sound that fills the walls

Empty house, empty soul

There's only me in the void

Me and windows and mirrors

My reflection- reflection of you

Surrounded on all sides

The memories you made me hide

Of when you lied

Of when we cried

And then you died.

With me on my own

Left all alone,

Alone in our home

Hiding in my closet

Breathing in your scent

Covering shattered porcelain

With shattered glass

Into a mass so high

It topples out the windows toward the sky

Just like I try again and again try

To fall, but you always catch me

Knowing what's best for me

Till I sweep up the rest of our dreams

With the glass and the memories

And I know I can reach you if I just jump in

Feeling the sharp shards sink into my skin

Shards of so many dreams

That you thought I could dream alone.

Love, you were so wrong.

All I hear are sirens

And all I taste is blood

And all I see are booted feet

And all I feel is agony.

And I know I'm forever gone from you.