ALL RIGHT EVERYPONY HOW ARE YOU I GOT THIS IDEA LAST NIGHT SO I DECIDED TO ROLL WITH IT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ITS MY FIRST REALL ATEMPT AT DOING A FIRST PERSON WITH OUT ADDING ("HI"SAID BLANK)TO MY OCs TEXT SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
PROLOG
"ugh where am I"
"you are in limbo my boy" said a voice in the dark
"Alright how did i get here then"
"You... were hit by a car" it deadpanned
'oww this things voice hurts I mean come on why do you have to shout' "could you not be so loud"
"IS this better" now clearly identifiable as a boy
"yes. yes it is thank you.."
"Ah yes i should introduce my self I am death
"cool"
"You know normally people scream and try to run" he said
"yes but what is the point when I am already dead and I didn't fear you when I was alive either so yeah"
"well that makes this so much easier to do than if you were because for the few who don't fear me i offer a job you are not forced to but i would greatly appreciate it if you took this job" he asked
"well what is this job you have me interested in it"
"you would become death for a different world"
"sounds pretty kick ass so two questions."
"ok shoot" he said
"one how many deaths are there and two what powers do I get"
"There are about 600 of us if you accept and as for powers you will be able to control all types of magic and you have a bone form plus animals fear you unless you look them in the eyes and think you will not harm them also the animals will respect and listen to you"
"cool that sound like it will be handy"
"It really is handy its helped me many times"
so for a while we talked about the powers i was to receive the he told me i was to be death of a world called equestria and that it was inhabited by Dragon,pony's,gryphon,monitors,changelings,and many many animals.
And as for my powers i can shape shift use all the types of magic to a degree my main magic is dark magic and i have a small amount of hidin talents as well that are different and unique to each death.
TIME/LOCATION SKIP LOCATION EVERFREE FOREST TIME TEN MINUTES BEFORE NIGHTMARE MOON REVELS HERSELF.
"ugh agine with my head this shit is getting old already"
grrrrrrrrrrr
"the fuck"
grrrrrrrrrrrr
"alright that's it you die"
as i turned around there was a wolf made of woo so i just stared in to its soul and that bitch shut up like that
"yeah that's what I thought" 'I will not harm you' "hmm lets see if I can make it to where you look like a normal wolf and lets give you a voice.
after a few minutes of work she was all black with green eyes and had a very soft relaxed voice
"alright so do you have a name"
"yes master my name is Sara"
well Sara my name is Jacob and i am this worlds death"
"so you are going to kill the world"
"no I mean im am death like the reaper I send souls to their final destination"
"oh"
"Yeah my bad I said that weird oh well"
"so what are we going to do now"
"well let's go this way I see a structure"
AND THATS CHAPTER ONE OF A NEW DEATH SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.