This is my first story, constructive criticisms is welcome. Just a heads up I'm going to take some creative liberties when it comes to how stands and the stand arrows work. I'm also only up to part 4 in JJBA so sorry if I get things wrong.


Jaune was not having a good day, scratch that not having a good week! He had finally gotten over this weird sickness he had for a week. It weird because he got it as soon as he accidentally cut himself on the old golden arrow when he visited his uncle's house, although Jaune was still wondering why it was hidden under his uncle's bed. After waking up without a fever he thought that his luck would final turn around, but noooooo live had to screw he over again! First he was late for classes, as he didn't wake up to his alarm. Next during class with miss Goodwitch (sternest teacher in beacon) he forget to do his homework witch was given to us 2 weeks ago and of course was made to stay after class and got a lecture about basically how he is the lowest in the class and needs to work harder. After class he nearly tripped grabbed onto something to stop him from falling… that something happen to by Yang Xiao Long's hair. Jaune just so happened to pull off the smallest hair off Yang's head but to her that was like kicking a new born kitten, so it was no surprise when she flew into a violent rage and processed to chase Jaune around Beacon for the rest of the day until he lost her just in time for *internal sign* combat class. Since Jaune wasn't able to train with Pyrrha for a week meant he was even farther behind everyone else and being exhausted after being chased by Yang did not help.

Miss Goodwitch was standing in the middle of the arena checking the list for who was going to fight next.

"Please not me, please not me, please not me, please not me" Jaune chanted to himself

"Don't worry Jaune, you only lost a week of training even wh- I mean if you loss he can always catch up." Pyrrha said trying to cheer him up, but it made feel worse reminding him of how weak he is

Miss Goodwitch looked up from her scroll pad to speak "Jaune Arc will you please step into the ring"

"Good Grief" Juane muttered to himself

Miss Goodwitch looked at Jaune "you will by facing against…" She looked back down at her pad for his opponent. she turned back to looked at Juane her eyes held an almost apologetic look in them for a second before turning back to her naturally stern face.

"Cardin Winchester" At the mention at those words Juane was filled with dread.

Jaune hated fighting Cardin, He even would have preferred yang at the moment and he could tell by just glancing at her that she was still boiling with rage. Cardin wasn't strongest in the school put he was definitely stronger than Jaune. Because of not being the strongest he liked to pick on those weaker than himself, especially Jaune. Everyone including Miss Goodwitch was aware of this but she only sees it during combat class and no matter how many times she verbally punishes Cardin he won't stop, in fact sometimes it makes it worse. He also can't get a detention as trash talking during a fight is not against any rules in Beacon

"Well, well, well non-descript winter holiday most have come early this year I get another round with my favorite punching bag" Cardin said with a smug look on his face with his mace leaning on his shoulder.

"*Sign* lets just gets over with," Jaune said drawing his weapon with a look saying he just wanted to be done with it all.

Jaune wanted this to be over quickly so he decided to charge at Cardin

Cardin could see how tired Jaune was so instead of attacking he just kept dodging all of Jaune attacks smirking as he did.

"Wow your even weaker today, your really are impressive I didn't know you could get any worse at this" said Cardin just before he started laughing

This caused Jaune to get angry and put more power and speed into his next swing.

It was heading straight for Cardin and it looked like it would hit and do a fair bit of damage, but Cardin deflected it with his mace causing Juane to drop his weapon.

Cardin raised his mace up for another swing. Jaune tried to block with his shield, but in the process of blocking the attack his shield got thrown away.

More adrenaline flowing through him, Jaune rolled out of the way of Cardin's next attack towards his sword.

Jaune managed to grab his sword just in time to see Cardin reading another much stronger attack. Cardin stared down at him with a look of superiority, Juane's aura was getting low and this final attack if it landed with bring him to the red and end the fight.

Jaune try to block with his family's heirloom and seemed to hold back for a minute but Cardin getting frustrated activated the fire dust in his mace causing an explosion.

The explosion knocked Juane back. His aura was just outside the red as his sword took most of the damage but at cost.

The arc family sword past down for generations had finally broke in 2 and was laying before him.

Jaune got down on his hands and knees and was ready to cry for letting this happen.

"Aw is the little baby going to cry" Cardin said mockingly as he walked over to him

"Oh come on Jauney boy it just a sword so it belong to your family for generations or something, but hey those dumb arcs won't need it anymore, most of them are a bunch of washed up old warriors or like you almost too weak to pick up the damn thing, they won't need it any.

THAT. IT! Jaune thought to himself with fury in his eyes. You can insult him but Jaune will never let ANYONE! Insult his family. Sure they didn't support him being a huntsman but he loved them all more than anything.

Jaune focused the rest of his aura into his fist and swung at Cardin's jaw. It almost felt like the world was slowing down. Cardin had an emotionless look for a moment until he smirked and moved his head out of the way just before the fist connected with his jaw.

At that moment Jaune felt worthless, he put everything he had left in to that attack and he still failed. Why was he even surprised he had always been a failure, to weak to be a huntsman, to weak to change anything.

Nothing was ever going to change that.

ORA!

Just then another fist Cardin, square on the jaw, not only shocking him but knocking him off his feet into the air. It was purple hand wearing a fingerless glove with brass bolts on the back of the hand. Jaune looked up and saw a large purple muscular man standing above him. The being wore a red scarf, gold shoulder pads, a gold headband with a white smooth jewel on it and long wild black hair.

Just then another flurry of punches hit Cardin all over, making him look like a floating ragdoll. The beings fists were moving so fast if looked like he was punching him in five different places at once.

ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA, ORA

ORA!

With the final punch Cardin was flung across the arena, cracking the wall he landed on.

When the dust settled Cardin was knocked out and completely out of aura, while Jaune was left stunned along with everyone else in the room.

-To be continued


And thats the end of the 1st chapter, hope you like it. I may add parings with Jaune later on but I'm not sure who to pair him with. Arkos seems to be the one that makes the most sense but I also find it pretty generic since Pyrrha already loves Jaune so there no build up of her emotions.