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Sonny with a chance

If I would have known that eating a bagel would ruin everything, I wouldn't had eaten it in the first place, but what's done is done...But let's start from the beginning shall we.

I was just hanging out at home when suddenly Tawni tore the door open, and started yelling at me like a crazy.

"Why are you just laying there, we're supposed to be in the studio, all of us, so come on hurry up." Tawni yelled while she was looking at her new pink and probably pretty expensive watch.

"There isn't any show today I got a text an hour ago." Sonny said wondering why Tawni hadn't also gotten a text.

"Who send you that text?"

"I don't know it was anonymous so I guessed that it was from Marshal."

"That's impossible, he is burning up of his own rage, because you aren't there." Tawni said while reminding herself that they better hurry up.

"But if it wasn't Marshal and I have all of the mobile numbers from the So Random crew, who could it be?." She said thinking if it could be "him".

"Why are you asking me about it, I don't know." Tawni said reminding herself a second time that they needed to hurry up.

"Could it be Chad, no I has his number."

"You can ask him later, right now we need to be in the studio practicing fore the new sketch, so take your ugly shoes on and run" Tawni said while checking her hairstyle, not that there was any thing wrong about it. After we "both" were done we ran as fast as we could over to the studio.

"Oh good god, you're finally here" Marshal said with a big relive in his voice.

"I'm really sorry Marshal, I got an anonymous text and thought that..." I said but got interrupted by Marshal.

"Yeah yeah tell me later kiddo... Okay people are you all ready to practice the new sketch, but before we start, are there any questions?" He said hopping there wasn't any questions.

"Yeah, I have one, what sketch are we talking about?" I said having the feeling that I had missed something.

"Oh right, you weren't here... Tawni will explain it for you, right Tawni?"

"Right" Tawni said with a high toned voice.

Everyone from the crew began walking over to the studio to practice, except me and Tawni.

"Okay listen closely cause I'm only going to tell you this once... And then the monkey played by Grady comes in and begin to run after the math teacher played by you, any questions?"

"Actually I...?" I began to say when I suddenly got interrupted fore the the second time since I walked into studio 3, I think it's some kind of curse.

"I didn't think so." Tawni said while she smiled and turned around, and began to walk over to studio 4 where they should practice.

After the rehearsal we all gathered in the prop room, to talk about the new sketch... Cause it was pretty bad. When Zora asked about it there wasn't anyone that waned to confess, so we asked Marshal about it but he said that it came with the mail, probably a fan but still... It was pretty bad.

"Come on guys,oh...And girls of cause. It's a fan, do you really wanna brake this little girls wish, oh... Or a little boys dream." Marshal said with a confused look in his face.

"Kinda... As long as we don't look stupid" Tawni said like she didn't even care if it came from a fan or not.

We didn't know what to do, but we all knew what was the right thing to do.

"Guys, Marshal is right it's a fan, are we really going to disappoint one of our biggest fan."

"No...?" everybody said in a choir.

"That's the spirit, and now could you please go, I have to get some clown, monkey and …. Poo costumes?" marshal said taking his mobile phone up from his jackets pocket.

I was on my way over to The Falls to ask Chad about the anonymous text that I got this morning, but I met him on the way.

"Oh, hello Chad, what are you doing in this part of the building?"

"And hello to you too Sonny, It's quit a lovely day, don't you think. And well, to answer your question here's another question, why are you on your way over to The Falls?"Chad said like he was hiding something.

"Me... On my way over to The Falls" I tried to laugh, but it sounded a bit fake. "Only in your dreams" I said hopping he would just let me go, but I should have known that it would have been to easy.

"Well then I guess I must be dreaming right now" He said back just waiting on another one of my stupid excuses. I had to find a way to sneak me out of this, what ever it is.

"Oh, Chad, did you also just hear that"

"What are you talking about"

"Can't you hear it"

"Hear what!"

"You know what, you better go check your ears by a doctor about that bad hearing of yours, cause if you don't, you might lose your hearing. Do you really want that to happen. Think, it could ruin your carrier." I said hopping he would fall for it.

"I'm not falling for that" He said in a weird way. I almost panicked for a second, but then he said:

"Well, bye Sonny I have to check up on... something." He said like he suddenly had got in a hurry, and before he weened around the corner, I saw that he began running while he held his hands over his ears, like he tried to protect them. He looked kinda freaked out.


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