Okay this is my first story so if you don't like it that's ok just tell me what I could do better to make it a good story. OK well here is my first story hope you like it!
Chapter 1
"GIR GET OVER HERE!" "What that do what this do?" "GIR we are about to have a very important message and all you can think about is whatever you're looking at can do!" "Greetings Zim how is the planet wait hey where are my snacks gotta go Zim bye." "GIR you messed everything up." "HUH, what that do what this do." "OK you know what I give up on Gir but if this how he is supposed to be then I guess I have to keep him." At 9 am Zim went to skool and he always sat by himself but he didn't care because of the filthy humans.
When skool was over for the day Zim was walking home but felt as if he was being followed by someone. But every time he turned around nobody was there. But then he turned around one last time and BAM! Zim went flying then he hit something and all he saw was a blur.
A couple hours later Zim woke up to find himself at a house but not his house. Then he realized where he was. He was at Dib's house and he was trapped!