Firstly, I'd like to apologise for any mistakes in this, I did check it over twice and word says it is fine, but you can never be sure.
Secondly, I'm sorry for the shortness. This story was originally for Quizilla, and I have to do a heck of a lot of editing now (seeing as it was set in second person and I had to change it to third.) I also took out the character description I did for Rae, as well as a slightly 'spoiling' plot, but I think its better this way.
I will also be putting the new form on Quizilla once I have edited the nine chapters I have done so far, which may take a while but seeing as I'm a hard worker as well as a perfectionist, it probably won't take long.
If anyone wants the either the plot or Rae's description, PM me, I'd be happy to send it to you.
Rae pushed her suitcases down the stairs and watched them crash against each other at the bottom. Her sister appeared out of the living room to see what the racket was before rolling her eyes at her.
"Hurry up! You're going to be late; I thought this was your 'new start to life.'"
Rae groaned and walked down the stairs to get a quick breakfast. "It is and I'm excited, I really am. It's just I'm still really tired. I feel like my feet are made of lead" She grabbed a piece of bread and stuffed it in the toaster as her sister leaned against the frame of the door.
"You'll feel better later; it's just pre-nerves getting you down." She smiled at Rae, slightly worried. "Right, have you got everything?" She asked, walking out the room. Rae grabbed the toast as it popped up and followed her.
"Mph" Rae replied, while she took a bite out of the bread and tugged her shoes on. She grabbed her suitcases and gave her sister a quick kiss on the cheek "wish me luck" she joked as she walked out the door. Her sister waved at her, calling a reminder to visit her. Rae waved back and carried her suitcases to the bus stop where she waited for the bus to the train station.
She reached the platform nine, having got a trolley for her stuff. She struggled to push it against the crowd towards the wall with her small muscles, but finally reached it and ran through it with ease. Her heart beat fluttered and her stomach tied itself into a tight knot, she thought about everything that had happened to far, and everything that could happen in the future. She shook her head, as if to rid her brain of the thoughts before looking at the Hogwarts express.
Right this was it, her 'new start to life.'
She took a deep breath and started the long journey of her seventh year.
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