PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE YOU START SO EVERYTHING MAKES SENSE :)


Key:

John's writing (ages 4-13)

John's writing (age 15+)

Sherlock's Comments


The first three chapters of this are not as well written as I could have written then, simply because John is quite young when he writes his first three diaries. If you can't be bothered to read these chapters (I wouldn't blame you) then it is possible to skip straight to the fourth chapter. Or you can just skip the first chapter, which I'm apologizing in advance for if you do want to read it, as I hate it just as much as I'm sure you will. However, IT DOES GET BETTER (!), and I do advise that you read them all, just so you know the background to the story.

+ CHAPTER FIVE IS ON IT'S WAYYYY *screamsss*

Please review, as any advice is very precious to me. Thank you, and enjoy ^.^