Well, sorry. I hope the second version is better than the first one. If you read my first version please give me feedback on how I did.

"Hey Blossom I'm gonna go chill, I'll be back by sunrise." "Okay Buttercup. Be careful, if anything happens call me." "Bye Buttercup." My blonde sibling called from the kitchen where she was making dinner.

I grabbed my bookbag and walked outside, while the door closed behind me. Then I launched myself into the air where I began my flight to the park. 'Gosh how I love the feeling of the cool night air on my skin in mid flight.' When the park came into view I landed near the park bathrooms. I hid in a bush and searched for any signs of life, when I saw none I walked into the bathroom.

I changed out my standard green P.J.'s for a black corset that pushed my 34DD boobs together. Under a black cropped hoodie that had bear ears on the top, and neon green faux fur on the inside, that was left open. Above a skin tight pair of black skinny jeans, that was held up by a dark green pyramid stud black belt. I exchanged my fluffy slippers for my regular black boots.

I looked in the mirror, and styled my short hair into my usual scene fringe covering my left eye, with my green streak on the left. Then I straightened my black captive bead nose piercing, and my dark green snake bites. Then I make sure I didn't lose any of my earrings or gauges. 'I look great all I need is a little makeup.' Some thick eyeliner, a little mascara, and a bit of blood red lipstick outlined with black. 'Perfect.' I walked outside and began playing with my black dog collar choker, waiting for him.

Ginger: Now a thanks to my reviewers! My very first reviewer was a guest. Thank you. And I will update as fast as I can. : )

Buttercup: Yeah. I know I'm awesome. But still thank you for telling me!

Orchid (My OC that I will introduce in later chapters): Gosh Butters conceded much. I mean you are awesome but haven't you heard of something called being humble?

Buttercup: I'm gonna ignore what you just said because Ginger said that I could fight you later now our second reviewer, Chocoholic345.

Ginger: I hope you like the plot twist too. I put as much detail as I could think of... And no she is not... Though I can see how you came to that conclusion. I also fixed it to the best of my ability.

Buttercup: Well just wait til you read chapter two! WHY DOES EVERYONE ALWAYS THINK I'M A HOOKER? IS IT 'CAUSE OF MY TITS? I HATE THEM! IF IT WAS UP TO ME I'D BE AN A-CUP. Oh and it drove me crazy too.

Orchid: My boobs are bigger than mine so stop whining. Also I'm sure Ginger did the best she could. Now on to our third and final reviewer, ThatBadAuthor.

Ginger: Thank you very much that means a lot! I hope I can continue keeping you interested. I will work on it. I'll keep that in mind. Thank you I feel they are really OOC but okay. I'm glad someone thinks I'm interesting! Cool I'm unique! Thank you very much I will! Hope you enjoyed your Christmas! Buttercup and Orchid is to busy fighting to comment on this review... Sorry. *Marches off to stop them.* ... *Brings them back tied together... Nudges them with her foot.*

Buttercup and Orchid: We are very sorry and we will see you next chapter.