Key of Dark Forces

DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of these characters. I am not making ANY money off of this, so please don't sue me.

I hope you enjoy this. This in my first time posting and I need lots and lots of feedback for my nice little experiment.

THE GODDESSES HAVE TROUBLE CONTAINING THEIR POWERS. SERENA CAN'T CONTROL WHOSE MIND SHE BREAKS INTO TO, MANY OF JEMINA'S PREMONITIONS HAVE ALREADY HAPPENED, VANESSA IS DISAPPEARING EVEN WHEN HER EMOTIONS ARE FINE AND NORMAL, CATTY IS WAKING UP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT AND FINDING HERSELF IN THE MIDDLE OF THE AMERICAN CIVIL WAR. TIANNA IS FORCED INTO AN UNWAKING DREAM AND IS BELIEVED TO BE IN A COMA BY THE OTHER GODDESSES. AN UNSEEN FORCE IS WARNING AND GUIDING ONE OF THEM TO THE FINAL DESTINY.

Tianna awoke with a start. Her heart was racing and a sharp pain pulsed inside her head. She sighed and looked at the large red numbers on the clock by her bed. 6 AM to the minute. She lie in her bed, her eyes squeezed tight and a hand rubbing the temples on her forehead. A perfect Saturday morning and I have to wake up with a headache, she thought as she changed positions and nestled under the covers. She felt like she had just been jolted from a long dream. Although she couldn't remember it, the feeling and atmosphere of it lingered in the room. The memory and realization that she had to meet the other goddesses at the beach came to her as she nestled further and deeper into the sheets. She didn't want to get up. She was tired and she wanted to sleep. Although the mattress begged her to stay in it's warmth, she dragged her stiff body to the edge of the bed and tried to collect her thoughts. The pain in her head lingered, but she ignored it and pushed on. When she felt she was coordinated enough to stand, she pushed slowly off the bed and stumbled forward. She grabbed onto the dresser to steady herself. She screamed as the pain in her head worsened and pierced her thoughts like nails on a chalkboard. She stumbled and fell by her bed. She lay on her side, holding her head in her hands and fighting the urge to scream. Her thoughts went cold. Her eyes went dark. She faded into a sea of warm comfort.

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