ok so here's my story "naruto the saiyan ? " that was taken down a few months ago because of the sites managers took it down for "breaching guidelines " or something even though it wasn't anyway i had to rewrite the first chapter because of this

ANYWAY im glad to have finally uploaded this because i know a lot of people liked this story

i also want to thank my beta reader jewlbunny check out jewls profile for cool storys

anyway check out this awesome redone chapter - goku

"hello" normal speech

"hello" thought speech

"HELLO" demon spech/ jutsu

The lookout

Goku had arrived at the lookout after receiving a message from Dende. It was urgent so he had gotten there as fast as he could . As soon as he landed he was met by not only Dende but the Supreme Kai and Elder Kai aswel.

"Hey guys what's up" asked Goku.

"There's something going on with your brother, Goku." said Dende.

"Minato?" asked Goku, sounding serious, "What's wrong, is he hurt"?

"No" said Elder Kai " but The Leaf Village is currently being attacked by the Nine Tailed Fox, the Kyuubi No Kitsune."

"WHAT ? !" exclaimed Goku, "But how can that be ? The Nine Tails is sealed inside Kushina." he said slightly worried. 'Something must have gone wrong with the seal.' thought Goku.

"Yes, well there's been some complications and now the village is in grave danger." said Supreme Kai.

"Then I'm going to help him." said Goku

"Wait Goku you don't know if you can defeat the Nine Tails." said Elder Kai "And even so it wouldn't be your place. Your brother is the Hokage its his responsibility not yours. He's on a different planet than yours, you shouldn't interfere."

"I DON'T CARE! I'M NOT GOING TO SIT AROUND HERE AND DO NOTHING! I'M GOING TO HELP HIM!" screamed Goku, who raised his index and middle finger to his forehead preparing to use instant transmission. A seond later he was gone.

"Aaaarrgghh! Darn kid never listens." said Elder Kai in annoyance.

"I'll go and keep an eye on him." said a deep voice.

Turning around the three saw piccolo standing there "Oh Piccolo, I didn't see you there." said Dende.

"I'm gonna go and make sure Goku doesn't get himself killed." the elder Namekian said before teleporting after said Saiyan.

Kohona

In an abandoned shelter laid a woman. She had long red hair, and was quite beautiful. Even though she appeared to be pale and injured, in her hands she was holding a small baby, with blond hair in her arms. She was Kushina Uzumaki, one of the last of the Uzumaki clan, and heiress to the country of whirlpool .

There was a tall man kneeling next to her. He was blonde with a white coat, with red flames on the bottom, and the kanji for 'Fourth Hokage' on the back. He was Minato Namikaze, the Fourth Hokage.

"M-minato," said Kushina barely able to speak,"please don't tell me y-youre going to perform the sealing technique on N-naruto."

"Yes Kushina." he said gravely "Theres no other way."

She suddenly held the baby closer to her body in a protective manor "NO! I wont let you." she said with slightly renewed strength, "I wont let you force our son to the life of a Jinchuriki
w-why him why not some other child , why our son ."

The man looked down sadly "You know I couldn't do that to any other parent. How could I ask them to give up their child when I the Hokage cannot give up my own" said Minato "Any mother would be feeling what your feeling right now." he said while leaning closer to his wife. 'She's fading.' He thought looking at his wife as she slipped closer and closer to death.

She was staring into her son's eyes. They were blue just like Minato's, and he had her face with his fathers hairstyle. "I-I'm sorry, I wont be there for you to g-grow up Naruto." she said, her eyes beginning to mist over.

"All those t-times a parent is there with there c-children. I won't get to spend with you." she said. "Be a g-good boy when you get o-older, and you better not turn into a pervert like J-jiraiya or else lookout." she said smiling slightly as her eyes were closing slowly "Just know t-that your parents love you." she said kissing Naruto on the forehead before slowly handing him to Minato.

"I will always love you Minato-kun." she said.

"As I will always love you Kushina-chan." The Yondaime leaned down and kissed her tenderly on the lips as he parted he looked at his wife's closed eyes her face frozen in a small smile.

Small tears begin to fall down his cheeks as he held his son in his arms and used one of his most famous jutsu the 'Flying Thunder God' to teleport him to the battlefield.

The outskirt of Kohona

Goku appeared several miles away from the village. Looking around wondering why he wasn't in Kohona. 'Damn it! I over shot it.' he though before quickly taking off towards the village.

Another figure appeared a few minutes later, wearing a turban and a long flowing cape.

"Goku you better not do anything stupid." said Piccolo who took off in his direction.

ok so there it is i hope you enjoyed it

please review and pm me for any ideas

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naruto / hinata

naruto/tenten

naruto/fem haku

naruto/temari

naruto/tayuya

gaara/fem haku

gaara/tenten

gaara/tayuya

gaara/OC

gaara ino

until next time -goku