Hi this is my first story

Please tell my if there are any errors, because English is not my first language, German is =)

It was a dance. A dance between two brothers. An attempt to forget the horrors they had experienced. Their only refuge in a world of death and violence. Two broken souls united in a dance, giving each other comfort. They whirled around each other, parried, attacked, dodged. The dance had been danced by them many times, had become a ritual in order to escape the cold reality for a moment. It was a reminder of a time before the killing and hatred. When the galaxy was still quiet and peaceful. But this time the refuge should be over soon; soon they would have to go back out on the battlefield. Again have to face the horror and violence. But the dance describes also the hope, that one day they will find peace and won't have to fight anymore.

Please R&R