The kiss
Hi there! Its me! I'm new at writing these fan-fiction so go easy on me please! I know I suck at writing but I was told I have a good imagination so I decided to give it a try! Helpful criticism is welcome! If you like it please review! That would make me so happy! Thanks! (P.S. Sorry about failed spelling!)XD (P.S.S. Remember to wash behind your ears!) XP (P.S.S.S. The story begins after school lets out for the weekend!)
Normal P.O.V.
Maka and Soul have been going out for one month. Their confession was a simple and brief whisper of the words "I love you". That was it. With those two there was no need for anymore useless words. They both understood right away, the other person standing in front of them is their other perfect half. Or are they...
Maka's P.O.V.
He is my other perfect half ,right? My true love? The one and only one for me? My soul mate? (Author: yes pun intended) If this is all true...WHY IS HE KISSING SOMEONE ELSE!? I can hardly breath as I stand there and watch Soul (who is by the way MY BOYFRIEND!) kiss some random girl who I've never even seen before. I let a little squeak escape my lips as Soul just stands there enjoying the kiss (how do I know he's enjoying it when he's to far away for me to see his face? Well he's not RESISTING is he? No he's not!)! At that point in time I realize something. He isn't just kissing someone else. HE'S CHEETING ON ME! JUST LIKE MY NO GOOD PAPA! The fact hits me like a brick wall. Soul has done something so TERRIBLE so... so... HORRIFYINGLY WRONG that I can't forgive him. I can't even look at where he's standing! I turn away and run home.
Soul's P.O.V.
I was standing there in disbelief. The girl in front of me just confessed to me! She was standing right in front of me blushing BRIGHT red asking if I'm willing to even give her a chance as my girlfriend.
"no sorry I already..." I stared to say trying to tell her Maka was my girlfriend (and the only girl for me) but she cut me of by slamming her lips into mine. I stood there once again in complete shock because of what was happening! SHE WAS KISSING ME AND BELIEVE ME I WAS NOT ENJOYING IT! She was defiantly NOT Maka! And I refuse to kiss anyone BUT Maka!(Author: and sometimes Black*star right? Soul and Maka:NO FLIPPIN' WAY! Author: Just kidding!or was I...?) But I was literally not able to move away; she had me pinned against a brick wall! And this scrawny little girl was stronger then it seems! I tried to push her away but she just pushed back with more force! She crushed me against the wall ,but finally after what seemed like eons she pulled away and backed up. She looked at me and asked
"So whats your answer to that?"
I looked at her with all the hate I could then said in an sort of 'defiantly pissed of' voice
"As a was saying before I already have a girl and she doesn't force me to do anything I don't want to do in our relationship"
And with that I turned away from the girl not even peeking over my shoulder to see what her reaction was. I stomped home unhappy, hungry, and begging for the sympathy of my lovely girlfriend.
And completely unknowing of what was awaiting me at the apartment complex...
Hey! If you want more chapters then I need at least one "it was okay *shrugs* I guess" or else I'm not typing anymore chapters. So if you want some REVIEW! please?