IK this is short. It's only 224 words but it's a start.
FULL SUMMARY: Mei is in the middle of a snowstorm and can't find her parents anywhere. She goes to a empty cave, that she soon later realize that it's a wolf's den. Few years later, she's raised by the wolves into a beautiful, strong woman who hunts with the wolves. She meets another male who was also raised by wolves. What will happen during mating season?
"Mom, Dad!" yelled a young girl's voice. She was no older than ten years old with flowing black hair that reached her shoulders. She was wrapped in coats, scarfs mittens and warm heavy-duty red ruby eyes were beginning to fill with tears.
"Mom. Dad." she whispered as the snow and wind carried her whisper far away. Tears cascaded down her chubby cheeks, as she looked around. She was beginning to get tierd, and needed a warm place to sleep in. She kept walking against the snow until she saw a cave.
She held her ground against the wind and snow and got closer and closer to the cave until she she stepped into the cave. It felt a little bit warmer, but still cold. She went into the furthest corner of the cave and curled up.
She sighed as she got comfortable and relaxed and lulled herself to sleep. Little did she know that glowing eyes were staring at her small form. Whoever it was, saw the girl shivering lightly. It put a larger, fuzzy coat over her, who began to shiver once in a while.
The person sighed, running long fingers through curly raven hair. It was silent except for the sound of the wind blowing.
"What am I gonna do with you now?" a deep voice rumbled throughout the cave.
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