Tris pov-
I look in the mirror at my reflection I have shoulder length blond hair and grey blue eyes , suddenly my Mother walks in and I turn around and scream at her " get out can't you see im being selfish!' Than my mother says back "fine be that was you dirty toe fungas today is choosing day" 'Thank god i can finally get out of here' i say back.
**2 hours later
aaaaaaaaaahhhh the choosing ceremony finally i have been waiting for this my whole life, "There it is boys" I say to my brother, Caleb and my two neighbours Robert and Susan, we walk in and find our seats they call us up name by name and i eventually get sooo bored i almost fall asleep so Susan has to punch me when they call my name because i almost miss it, I get up from my seat and began to walk to the center where 5 bowls stand grey stone for abngation , water for erudite, earth for amity, glass for candor and hot coals for dauntless a man hands mr the knife and i make a cut in my hand it hurts so i beagan to cuss and swear, but i manage to stop for a few moments that i use to pour the blood into the hot coals ,dauntless the brave. I go and sit were the others who have chosen dauntless we wait for another half hour until the choosing ceremony is over somewhere within that time nothing much happend exept my brother Caleb chose erudite though i knew he would he was a good for nothing lazy know it all and im pretty sure that while we sat through the rest of the ceremony somebody farted im pretty sure it was that candor transfer Al because he looked rather embarresd. We are told to go outside and wait by the tracks and someone will meet us there great... i think to myself we get to jump on trains whoo hoo , my sarcastic prediction was true we had to jump on trains but its wasnt that bad i mean only one chick didn't make it ah well i made it and thats what counts when the train slows down i know thats our cue to jump offso i jump and land on my arse owwww i say i get up and make my way to where all the other initiates are standing , thats when i see it a huge hole that im guessing we have to jump into so i push that Max man- women out of the way and jump i don't scream cause i might need my voice for making sarcastic comments later thats when i land on somthing im pretty sure it a ... air matress ok than...