A Banished Goddess and a Rebellious Prince

Thanks to all the people who have been reading this and I'm sorry that this story hasn't been that good but hopefully after I've redone it it'll be better

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto nor Sakura nor Sasuke

Medieval style, it might be a bit boring at first but it should get more interesting later on. My first fan fiction, hope you like it!

She was a goddess banished to earth.

She lay unconscious by a lake with only a stained white robe to cover herself with. It was starting to snow and her short pink hair lay in the snowflakes, messy and uneven. Being cut and pulled apart just recently.

The young maiden would have frozen if not for the dark-haired man that carried her to shelter. He had been mesmerised by her beauty even though she was covered in dirt and the sort, her pink hair and slender body.

He was Prince Sasuke and unknown to him she was Goddess Sakura, banished to live as a mortal until she died or unless the other gods and goddesses decided to take her back, for her crimes.

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Sakura was dreaming, she was arguing but then every god and goddess looked at her in disappointment. There was a blur and her waist-length pink hair was cut and pulled brutally by the others. Then it was dark, she could see nothing. Then a blurry vision of a mystical lake, pure white snowflakes that seemed so innocent unlike the stain on her robe which was another proof to her exile. But the most confusing vision was a dark-haired sir whose face was blurred as was everything else but his dark onyx hair.

Sakura finally awoke from her dreams, unfamiliar to the cosy bed she was in and dull grey bricked room with a single window. She forgot about the strange dream of her happenings instantly.

She decided on her plan, she would act dumb, pretend to be a young maiden who had gotten lost and abandoned.

Abandoned indeed, by the heavens.

It was her punishment for arguing with the other gods and goddesses against their cruel plans. She had to face it; she was never going to be accepted back...

"You're awake?" A cold, stone like voice broke her chain of thoughts and self-pity. She was used to cold tones, to survive in the heavens you needed to know to be subtle with the difficult gods and goddesses, one mistake and you could end up in exile, as she was in now.

She looked up and saw a young, handsome man sitting on the chair near the window.

"Yes, was it you who saved me sir?"

"Indeed, but why were you lying there unconscious near the lake wearing only a robe?" He was so straight-forward. Reminding her of the others she now wanted so to desperately forget about.

"Before I answer that might I ask who you are?" She asked thinking of how to reply and what she would do. He was too quick to get to the point.

"Sasuke Uchiha" He said formally but with the usual uncaring tone, but yet he wanted to get to know her as a normal mortal, not a prince. It was something inside him that reacted instantly. After all he was sick of being loved only because of his title and looks.

"And I am Sakura Haruno, I had gotten lost and was abandoned, so tired that I merely fell unconscious after having a drink of water by the lake,"

Daughter of God Haruno, her cruel father who cast her out without a second thought all because he believed her to be weak for caring for mortals unlike the rest of the gods.

"Thank you for saving me Sasuke," She gave him a warm, genuine smile.

He was rendered speechless.

Again mesmerised but by her green orbs instead. Sasuke was surprising himself again and again

"Hn." The only thing he could bring himself to say.

He heard the faint sound of a horn waking him from his daze and remembering the meeting with his father he was to attend to that afternoon.

"I must leave now, stay here until I come back and I shall help you then." He said coldly and with that he left.

"Of course," Sakura said after the door was shut.

Such a cold sir, she never knew mortals were also so very cold, yet still her saviour, staying with him would be the best option. Sakura wouldn't dare risk going out there without someone to guide her after all Sakura had not a single possession but her long, stained white robe.

Her green eyes flickered around the room, memorising where everything was. A wardrobe, desk, bed and the chair by the window which was to her right.

Sakura made sure all was quiet and opened the wardrobe. Inside were uniforms, armour and formal clothes for an occasion such as a ball. No clothes for a lady such as herself, but what did she expect from the cold gentleman who dressed as a soldier?

Sakura closed the wardrobe door and opened a drawer finding it filled with letters, love letters at that. She jumped up as the door of the room was opened and a fair-haired sir came in shouting.

"SASUKE! Training time! I'll beat y..."

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