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I'm sorry it took so long to update it but I was feeling lazy and realized that my intro wasn't as good as I thought it was until I read it afterwards. Anyway here is the remake of the intro and please review if you like it also I am open for discussion if you have ideas for the story just so long as it doesn't screw with anything I have planned later and I will let you know if it will or not so let me finish up this rambling and let you read the story. (I do not much care for re-typing it every chapter so here is mine "I DON'T OWN POKEMON IF I DID THE ANIME WOULD HAVE MUCH MORE GOOD HUMOR!")
Also I will have changed certain things and make them more realistic and somewhat my own creation.
Ch. 1
Unexpected
Nothing in this world ever happens for no reason for even if there is an Arceous or not it is simply the way the world works, no matter how insignificant the action may be so lets see how things play out for a certain boy and pokemon.
We see a boy looking to be somewhere around 17 years old laying on the ground of a forest with his head resting on a log. The sky is clear and the wind is all that can be heard, a perfect day to just relax and this young man intends to do just that. This young man was sporting a rather large black beret. Also a black long-sleeved shirt and worn out blue jeans. He has a very frail looking body and pale color to his skin. "Sigh" he opens his eyes "Why can't I just go to sleep?" For such a small young man his face seemed emotionless. He silently reached for his belt and grabbed a small red and white ball and stared at it. "Who would've guessed." The item in his hand was a Poke-Ball and this one had a large scratch in it. It seemed like he was in a horrible mood. He raised his arm to block the sunlight "Perhaps today would be a good day to visit mom." Soon after talking to himself he got up and started walking to the nearest town.
Meanwhile somewhere else
"BACKOFF!" yelled a very pissed looking pokemon. A green haired creature was surrounded by a group of trainers with vicious looking pokemon. Although they were clearly at an advantage they still looked unsure, and slightly scared of this woman. Her facial expressions were terrifying for she looked like if they took one more step closer she would rip their heads off. "I SAID BACKOFF!" she yelled again but this time with glowing eyes, which intimidated them even more but not because of the knowledge of her psychic powers. But her eyes were glowing black along with her hands, she was using shadow ball. Then one man walked up to her despite her warnings with an awfully smug grin on his face "I am sorry but you are just too rare to let go, but how about this we will let you have the weekends to do whatever you want and the rest of the time you will belong to us, that is if you come willingly" this one man showed no fear in fact he almost looked innocent….. almost. She then pointed her hand toward him his eyes opened wide and his cockiness looked as if it was bitchslaped off his face "Nice bluff, but we all know if a pokemon were to attack a human they would be hunted by the police." He said with a dead serious look. Then there was a long silence untill she turned and looked at them all and the boy regained his smirk knowing that he won "Then let them come." They were all speechless, for this was not in the plan. Suddenly a bright light shined from her body temporarily blinding everyone surrounding her. "YAHH!" She screamed as she launched her shadow balls at each one of the pokemon along with the humans. "AHHH!" screams, groans, and grunts were heard as each shot hit their mark. "I'll get you back you bitch." He said just before passing out. Then another long silence she then smirked "Take that smartass." She finally shown her own smirk while she decided to dig through their bags to look for supplies 'GROWL'…. But mostly she was just hungry.
Back with the frail boy
The sun was setting as the small boy sat infront of a broken stone with writing on it that said
Here lies a loving mother
And a beautiful wife
RIP Savanah Niven
The boy still had his expressionless face "Hello mother"
Flashback
The sweet smell of pancakes was filling the room and a fully dressed man was sitting at the table sipping from a coffee mug when he spotted you "Well look who's up" said the man. He reached for you and tossed you up on his lap "Did the smell of your mothers cooking wake you up?" the small boy was nodding his head happily "Well hold on just a bit and it will be ready in a jiffy" she giggled and smiled at him. Then the dad put him back on the floor and asked "Hey kiddo think you could go get my shoes for me?" He nodded again "Yes dad" then he took off for his parents room across the house. The small boy was looking in the closet but couldn't find them so he turned looking around the room and found them by the foot of the bed when he heard a loud crash 'glass shattering' "AHHHH!" the mother screamed "SAVANAH!" yelled the father. Soon after a loud bang along with splintering wood could be heard "YOU BAST-!" howled the large man before being knocked out and slamming onto the floor. "DAD!" the child cried standing by the front door in the hall as he saw his father on the floor. The three men see the him when one spoke up "There's the little brat." Then another started "I'll get him." This spooked him into a sprint out into the yard and deep in the woods with one in pursuit. "You can't get away you little –ack" said the man as he was bitten on the arm by a Mightyena for disturbing his sleep. "Let go you mutt!" yelled the man seeing the boy was getting away. The boy was still running while breathing at a rapid pace until he tripped on something and was about to fall on something red then 'BOOM'
End of Flashback
He quicklyjumped to his feet after hearing a noise when he saw the source was a man with a gun and something seemed familiar about him "Finally I found you ya brat"
Back over with the Gardevoir
She was just finishing up eating what she snagged from their bags and while she was at it she decided to take a few things from them seeing as she was going to be hunted down anyway the backpack she was digging through had an assortment of items like potions, rope, rations, a small tent, sleeping bag, and … "ugh … pokeballs." She stated and started throwing them behind her when she heard one click and absorb something "Huh?" she looked and saw one with a red light on and was shaking then stopped. She walked up and carefully picked it up and pressed the button when it opened and her mouth dropped seeing that it caught a human "But… I thought…" soon a huge smile creped onto her face and she started stuffing the empty balls back into the bag and threw the bag on her back. "This is gonna be hilarious" she giggled like a child.
Thanks for reading everyone and also remember reviews are much appreciated. This is a remake of the intro and I'm hoping that you all like it more this way. Also I added more to the story wanting to add more to character development.
