After rereading my first 8 chapters of Digimon: Angel Sin, I wasn't entirely happy with it so I decided to rewrite it (or at least most of it) and try again.
Disclaimer: I don't own Digimon but I do own majority of the characters in this story.
-Nakamura High, Early Morning, Last Day of School-
Four figures, covered in shadows, moved swiftly through the school building, setting up what they believe will be the greatest prank in the history of the school.
"This is gonna be great!" yelled one, obviously male figure barely above a whisper.
"Tell me about it. All we have to do is show up about ten minutes after the teachers get here and make sure they eat the special energy bars that we have the seniors give them." replied another male.
"Won't they find it suspicious that the four of us are here before anyone else?" asked a female.
"It's already been taken care of. I told about half the students to show up to school five minutes before us if they wanted to see something that will make them laugh for the rest of the sumer." said another female.
"Let's just hope we don't get caught." Was the last thing said before they slipped out of the school and back home to get some sleep before their prank.
-Nakamura High, Last Day of School-
The teachers arrived at the school in high spirits. Today would be the last day they saw their students and could take a break for a while. They all sat in the teachers' lounge discussing their summer plans, never expecting what was to come.
"Well I plan on taking an overseas trip with –" the computer teacher was interrupted by a knock at the door and went to answer it.
"On behalf of the senior class, we would like you to have these energy bars from America that we special ordered for you."
A tall, blonde girl from the cheerleading squad handed the teacher a box of energy bars and left.
"Well that was nice of them." said the principal as she ate the bar along with her fellow teachers.
-10 minutes later-
As all the students, except for four, were lazing about the hallway outside the teachers' lounge, annoyed at having had to get up so early and having found nothing funny, the teachers all burst out of the lounge and ran towards their special restrooms, clutching their stomachs.
"What was that all about?" asked one of the students
"I don't know but if that was why I got up so early, I'll be –"
The reply was never finished as loud screaming was heard from the restrooms and the teachers all came running out, dripping Kool-Aid from their shoes and pants, glitter on the rest of them, and holding onto their butts for dear life. The only sound other than the screams of the teachers was the roaring laughter of the students.
-Nakamura High, End of School, Principal's Office-
"Riiiiiiiing" The bell to dismiss school rang and all the students went running out of the building, except for 4 special kids.
"Dammit! I can't believe we got caught!" yelled one of them, punching a nearby locker. "Calm down Rai, It was bound to happen it was too well though out and cost too much to be anybody else." said one of the two females.
"That's true Riza but it didn't help that Dru dropped his wallet in one of the stalls."
"I said I was sorry. I didn't even know I had the thing on me when we were here."
"I promised my parents I wouldn't get into anymore trouble. How did I ever let you talk me into doing this?" asked the other female to no one in particular.
"Let us talk you into it? It was your idea Kira." said Riza.
"Oh yeah. I forgot about that."
"It was still a good prank." Everyone looked over at Rai. "Think about it. First we got the bars from America and put in a special laxative that wears off after 5 minutes. Then we convinced the seniors to give them to the teachers."
The others nodded.
"But we didn't stop there. We set up over 200 small cups of Kool-Aid on the restroom floor and rigged it so that the moment the stall doors were opened, the glitter fell down on them."
They all smiled and started chuckling.
"Then we topped it off with Icy-Hot on the toilet seats. They couldn't sit down for the whole day."
All four of them fell down onto the ground, holding their sides from laughter.
"For your information, we still can't sit down Mr. Himura."
At that time the principal came out of her office and looked at the four of them, causing them to stop laughing immediately.
"I should expel the four of you but since it's the last day of school and you put so much thought into this prank, I'll let you off with janitorial duty for today and all of next school year. You better get started now or you'll be here until midnight."
The four of them saluted her as if they were in the army.
"Yes ma'am Ms. Katou"
They quickly left to clean up the mess that they made and then some so that they could get out of the prison called school before night fall.
"That really was a well thought out prank. I wish I would've thought of something like that when we were in school." said an unknown voice from behind Ms. Katou.
"You weren't smart enough back then Kazu and you still aren't actually." She replied with a slight smirk.
"Yeah that's true….Hey!"
"I'm only joking Kazu."
"I knew that." Kazu rubbed the back of his head nervously. "But seriously, there's something familiar about those four. It's like I met them before….sometime in the Digital World."
"That's impossible. They weren't even born then…..but I get the same feeling as well."
-Nakamura High, Restrooms-
Rai and Dru were busy cleaning the men's restroom, still laughing about the day's prank. Riza and Kira were across the hall in the women's restroom, marveling at the mess they made.
As the four of them neared cleaning up the restrooms, a blue light flashed through the school and the four of them disappeared without a trace.
Well that's the rewritten chapter one. I'll be getting chapters 2-8 rewritten sometime today. There might not be too many noticable changes to the chapters but there will be some.