SO this is basically my take on what would happen if jaune had the gifts of achilles and im not going to make him stupidly op he's going to based off of smite achilles in terms of weapons that he has but his weapons have a bunch of hidden surprises.

For those of you who aren't familiar with achilles he's a greek hero from the trojan war whose mother dipped him in a creek called the river styx and it made him invulnerable but it came with a spot and it made his heel his weak point.

His weapons are going to be a spear and a shield but they'll mechashift into different weapons because it'd be stupid if his weapons limited him to just a spear/shield.

I'm going to start at episode one right before ruby is the dust store that gets robbed. So now that i'm done with the exposition, tell me what you think of it.

You'll notice slight changes to the story such as characters not being involved who should've been

Hello my names Jaune Arc bearer of the mark of achilles and this is my story

Kingdom of Vale, Guns and Roses

"Jaune it's ready"

Jaune looks up to see his spear Retribution and his shield Arclight finished reforging

"Thanks Forge"

I walk up to forge and hand him the lien and he looks at me and puts his on my shoulder

"I put in a new upgrade jaune the shaft has a slot you can slide in dust cartridges or aura to fire it from the tip of the spear and the shield if you funnel aura into it you can have it take on any shape of anything you want"

I pop open the chamber and put some dust into it and close it.

Never know when that could be helpful

CRAASSHHH

"What was that"

I look at forge and he opens the door to see a large red scythe implanted in the ground

"Oh" Forge and I say in unison

I look at forge "Stay here i'll handle this"

I draw my spear and i feel my gauntlet mechashift in a shield around my hand

"You have no idea how much trouble you are in"

Who the hell are you

I look up at the orange haired creamsicle

"A warrior"

I look around i duck and side kick someones feet under me and feel a body slide over my shield

I need to end this quick before someone gets hurt

BANG BANG BANG BANG

I look up and i see the girl with the scythe and she her shoot herself up the side of the building

I jump up the ladder and see creamsicle jump into a bullhead

"Hey buddy remember me"

I point my spear at the bullhead as it fires and i see it become absorbed by the woman next to creamsicle

"Well that's new"

I lower my spear and will my shield to turn back into a gauntlet

"Soooo coool"

I turn to see the scythe girl "Hey my names Ruby, Ruby Rose"

"Call me Jaune Arc"

We hear a voice behind us

"So now that we know your names want to explain why there's a crater"

Glynda goodwitch headmistress of beacon

"There was a robbery and i tried to stop them" Ruby tells her

"And your story"

"Oh right her scythe hit the ground"

Come with us and

Vale Police Department - Interrogation Room

"Do you two know who i am" Ruby and i stare at the man in front of us

"Your Professor Ozpin headmaster of beacon"

I look at him and say "Your the leader of beacon"

He looks at me and ruby "Yes that's right i am and i'd like to offer you both a chance to not only do what you did tonight again but to become hunters."

"Ok" we both say in unison

Ozpin gets up and opens the door "8am to beacon don't be late for initiation oh and welcome to beacon"