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are by J.K the bestest author there is in the world!! hehehe actually some
people would say different but anyway im blabbing on. If you give me flames
I don't give because well this is an online thingy and its not like id be
losing money from it if yell hated it, lol ok back to story (first story
fic hehe!)
The Scream of a Mother
By: Me
Wake up lily!''Argh mom its only 11:00!!!" screamed Lily. She got up and threw some clothes on. "Oh boy do wish I were sleeping again." Lily slowly walked down stairs awaiting her pancakes in the kitchen. Lily was 11 years old and she had curiously bright green eyes and red hair.
Lily entered her kitchen, which was a bit small, but it was good enough. It was framed with pictures of Lily and Petunia and artwork they had done over the years. (A/N haha I know imagine pictures of you in your kitchen?)
Petunia was already up. Petunia was a bit ugly and fat for her age, Lily was thankful she got the good looks, because her sister sure didn't.
"Hey seester," Petunia said as she caught a glimpse of lily. "Ok, uhhh I think someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed this morning," she grimaced. Lily hated petunia she was so annoying, and her attitude showed it.
"Stuff it petunia," Lily said. "I don't see why you just can't leave me alone, when you wake up your hair is like permanently glued to YOUR face because of the spit you drool out at night!"
"Firehead, how would you know, do you like watch me or something, and plus I was just kidding," Petunia added. She was really immature for a sixteen year old.
"Ok girls, please be quiet! Lily, here's your pancakes, Petunia here's yours, now please stop antagonizing Lily PETUNIA." Said her mother. Lily's mother was pretty with red hair and blue eyes. Lily got her mothers hair and her father's eyes. (A/N-yes its true younger children are more favored than older ones, haaha j/k)
"Fine always taking……….." her voice droned off as an owl perched on the window. It was a beautiful white bird, with green eyes, almost like Lilys except Lilys were much prettier. "Ahhhhh!" petunia screamed, "Why is there an owl o-o-ver there?!?!"
"Just let it sit there, it will eventually go away," said her mother, with a hint of curiosity in her voice. She turned around and went to sit down and eat her own breakfast when the bird flew in and dropped a letter on the kitchen table.
"Yuck get it out of here," petunia screamed. Lily just ignored her and focused on the letter, which was addressed to her.
It was a thick envelope, made of yellow parchment and in red ink it read:
Miss Lily Evans
4 Privet drive
Little Whinging
Surrey
"Oh Lily, here honey this must be for you," her mother said as she handed it over to lily.
Lily turned the letter over which was sealed with a wax seal. She opened it and looked inside. It read:
HoGwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry.
Headmaster: ALBUS DUMBLEDOR (order of Merlin, first class, grand sorc, Chf. Warlock, Supreme mugwump, international confed. Of wizards.
Lily thought this was quite weird and strange, possible a joke, but she read on anyway.
Dear Ms. Evans,
We are please to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find the enclose list of the books necessary to start your first year at hogwarts. Term begins by September 1st, please owl back as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Minerva Mcgonagall
Wow lily thought, uhm this is new. She wondered if it was a joke, but if it wasn't it sounded like a whole lot of fun. "Mom, I think you should look at this," lily said. Her mother looked up and took the letter.
As her mother started to read the letter her blue eyes grew wider and wider. When she was nearing the end she screamed. "OHH WHO WOULD PLAY SUCH A STUPID TRICK, they MUST THINK THAT WE ARE EXTREMELY STUPID!!!''
"Mom I think it might be real. I don't really think owls can fly and deliver letters, so anything is possible! Maybe I can actually go to a magic school. It said to owl back so maybe we can write a letter and give it to the owl?" lily asked.
Petunia was still in shock about the owl. "Dirty little things they are, ewww."
"Well lily, you can owl back but if this, this thing is really real then you aren't going!"
"Whatever," was what she replied back, "that's really trivial, we have to find out if its real first mom," said lily. Lily proceeded in writing a letter back. It wasn't very good but it did state her disbelief.
Dear Hogwarts,
I think you sent an owl to the wrong house. If this is a joke it I would really appreciate you not sending anything else. Sincerely,
Lily Evans
Lily attached the letter to the owl's beak and sent it off, secretly; she hoped that it was real. She hated living with petunia and going off to a magic school would well, be interesting.
Lily waited two days until a reply came back. It was about the same time in the morning.
"Mom, look," lily shouted" its letter. Lily was so excited she dropped it. She hurried and picked it up again. It looked the same as the first letter she had gotten. She opened it and it read:
Ms. Evans,
We are pleased to inform you that you are a witch and that you will most likely be going to hogwarts. Since your reaction is a bit muggleish I assume that you have no proper witch in your family, so you can be picked up at 1 am on August 25th and taken to diagon, Alley, I hope that then, everything will be explained for you. Remember to bring money. Sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
"Oh, mom they said it was a mistake. I wont be going anywhere after all," lily said. She knew she was lying to her mother, but her mother herself had said she wouldn't let her go, so lily kept it to herself.
"Well, ok honey im sorry that your disappointed but I wouldn't have let you go anyway, so it doesn't matter and everything is cleared up." Her mother said.
Lily waited for ten days (It was August 15th) it was really hard for her. Petunia kept bothering her because of the letter and her father who was tall medium build with dark brown hair and green eyes thought the whole idea would have been cool. Lily rarely ever saw her father. Her mother was still freaked out.
Little did they know that lily would soon be taken to diagon alley and enter the magical world.
It was 1 am August 25th and no one had come for lily. She had planned to sneak out of her window. It was still dark. Lily took her sheets and tied them together. She tied it to the window latch and proceeded to climb down the 2 stories.
She was climbing down and all of a sudden she SLIPPED. "Someone help me, help, HELPP," lily screamed. No one was coming for her. Did this mean she was going to die? Was she going to die by falling from her window? She could see the newspaper headlines. Girl Mysteriously falls from her two- story window. Parents are baffled.
"Help!!!"She cried. "Someone please help me!" she cried again. And suddenly like out of a fairy tail a bus stopped in the street. All of a sudden her hands let go but she fell on something soft. And then she realized she was in midair frozen. This is really scary lily thought.
Someone stepped out of the bus and helped her to her feet.
"Hi my name is Earl," he said "and where might you be going?"
Lily who was feeling a little light headed replied, "Diagon Alley," She started to feel very light and airy. Everything after that she didn't remember.
When she awoke she was on a bed, she didn't know how she got there and the bus was making such a loud noise.
Then the guy who had saved her came up to her bed and said, "You fainted and I got strict orders to take you to diagon alley. "B-but who told you that, and where am I?" lily said.
"Oh sorry he said," he said, "you must be a muggle, this is a night bus. It is for witches and wizards who need a ride to get somewhere." He looked around and lily noticed there was no one on the bus. "Well it is not very busy tonight as you can see," he said.
Something then struck lily,"uhm how much does this c-cost?!?!" "Oh don't worry about it, it's for free. Like I said I have strict orders from the ministry to take you to diagon alley. Anything they need from me is for free. And besides that I doubt you have any wizard money." he said.
It was true lily had brought all of her money, but she didn't have any wizard money.
Finally they reached a large street. "Is this diagon alley sir?"
"No hold on." He pushed the bus doors open and walked over to a brick wall and tapped it three times." Now this, is diagon alley," he said after the brick wall turned into a large street.
It was amazing lily thought, and was the largest street she had ever seen. It was quite empty but she figured it was because of the time at night.
"Oh ok thanks earl. I owe you one I guess.
"Your welcome," he replied. He started to walk towards the bus again.
Wait Sir! How do I…" Lily didn't get to finish, earl had already gone and lily didn't know what to do. It was still dark out. She looked at her light up watch and it was 4 am.
She shivered. She didn't remember to bring her jacket. She already missed home and realized she had to write a letter to her mother first thing in the morning, if she was to wake up. She didn't want her parents to freak out. Lily sat against a street wall, and exhausted as she was, fell asleep.
************************************************************************A/N ok that was the first chapter, please review I really don't know how to write this, so im still trying to get the feeling of this story. If you don't like it tell me, most likely the first 3 chapters are going to be boring! I have the second chapter done, but not on the internet, I just wanna know what you guys think before I keep going. If you have any ideas e- mail me at lbstar26@hotmail.com Ok bye –LilynjamesAAF
The Scream of a Mother
By: Me
Wake up lily!''Argh mom its only 11:00!!!" screamed Lily. She got up and threw some clothes on. "Oh boy do wish I were sleeping again." Lily slowly walked down stairs awaiting her pancakes in the kitchen. Lily was 11 years old and she had curiously bright green eyes and red hair.
Lily entered her kitchen, which was a bit small, but it was good enough. It was framed with pictures of Lily and Petunia and artwork they had done over the years. (A/N haha I know imagine pictures of you in your kitchen?)
Petunia was already up. Petunia was a bit ugly and fat for her age, Lily was thankful she got the good looks, because her sister sure didn't.
"Hey seester," Petunia said as she caught a glimpse of lily. "Ok, uhhh I think someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed this morning," she grimaced. Lily hated petunia she was so annoying, and her attitude showed it.
"Stuff it petunia," Lily said. "I don't see why you just can't leave me alone, when you wake up your hair is like permanently glued to YOUR face because of the spit you drool out at night!"
"Firehead, how would you know, do you like watch me or something, and plus I was just kidding," Petunia added. She was really immature for a sixteen year old.
"Ok girls, please be quiet! Lily, here's your pancakes, Petunia here's yours, now please stop antagonizing Lily PETUNIA." Said her mother. Lily's mother was pretty with red hair and blue eyes. Lily got her mothers hair and her father's eyes. (A/N-yes its true younger children are more favored than older ones, haaha j/k)
"Fine always taking……….." her voice droned off as an owl perched on the window. It was a beautiful white bird, with green eyes, almost like Lilys except Lilys were much prettier. "Ahhhhh!" petunia screamed, "Why is there an owl o-o-ver there?!?!"
"Just let it sit there, it will eventually go away," said her mother, with a hint of curiosity in her voice. She turned around and went to sit down and eat her own breakfast when the bird flew in and dropped a letter on the kitchen table.
"Yuck get it out of here," petunia screamed. Lily just ignored her and focused on the letter, which was addressed to her.
It was a thick envelope, made of yellow parchment and in red ink it read:
Miss Lily Evans
4 Privet drive
Little Whinging
Surrey
"Oh Lily, here honey this must be for you," her mother said as she handed it over to lily.
Lily turned the letter over which was sealed with a wax seal. She opened it and looked inside. It read:
HoGwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry.
Headmaster: ALBUS DUMBLEDOR (order of Merlin, first class, grand sorc, Chf. Warlock, Supreme mugwump, international confed. Of wizards.
Lily thought this was quite weird and strange, possible a joke, but she read on anyway.
Dear Ms. Evans,
We are please to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find the enclose list of the books necessary to start your first year at hogwarts. Term begins by September 1st, please owl back as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Minerva Mcgonagall
Wow lily thought, uhm this is new. She wondered if it was a joke, but if it wasn't it sounded like a whole lot of fun. "Mom, I think you should look at this," lily said. Her mother looked up and took the letter.
As her mother started to read the letter her blue eyes grew wider and wider. When she was nearing the end she screamed. "OHH WHO WOULD PLAY SUCH A STUPID TRICK, they MUST THINK THAT WE ARE EXTREMELY STUPID!!!''
"Mom I think it might be real. I don't really think owls can fly and deliver letters, so anything is possible! Maybe I can actually go to a magic school. It said to owl back so maybe we can write a letter and give it to the owl?" lily asked.
Petunia was still in shock about the owl. "Dirty little things they are, ewww."
"Well lily, you can owl back but if this, this thing is really real then you aren't going!"
"Whatever," was what she replied back, "that's really trivial, we have to find out if its real first mom," said lily. Lily proceeded in writing a letter back. It wasn't very good but it did state her disbelief.
Dear Hogwarts,
I think you sent an owl to the wrong house. If this is a joke it I would really appreciate you not sending anything else. Sincerely,
Lily Evans
Lily attached the letter to the owl's beak and sent it off, secretly; she hoped that it was real. She hated living with petunia and going off to a magic school would well, be interesting.
Lily waited two days until a reply came back. It was about the same time in the morning.
"Mom, look," lily shouted" its letter. Lily was so excited she dropped it. She hurried and picked it up again. It looked the same as the first letter she had gotten. She opened it and it read:
Ms. Evans,
We are pleased to inform you that you are a witch and that you will most likely be going to hogwarts. Since your reaction is a bit muggleish I assume that you have no proper witch in your family, so you can be picked up at 1 am on August 25th and taken to diagon, Alley, I hope that then, everything will be explained for you. Remember to bring money. Sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
"Oh, mom they said it was a mistake. I wont be going anywhere after all," lily said. She knew she was lying to her mother, but her mother herself had said she wouldn't let her go, so lily kept it to herself.
"Well, ok honey im sorry that your disappointed but I wouldn't have let you go anyway, so it doesn't matter and everything is cleared up." Her mother said.
Lily waited for ten days (It was August 15th) it was really hard for her. Petunia kept bothering her because of the letter and her father who was tall medium build with dark brown hair and green eyes thought the whole idea would have been cool. Lily rarely ever saw her father. Her mother was still freaked out.
Little did they know that lily would soon be taken to diagon alley and enter the magical world.
It was 1 am August 25th and no one had come for lily. She had planned to sneak out of her window. It was still dark. Lily took her sheets and tied them together. She tied it to the window latch and proceeded to climb down the 2 stories.
She was climbing down and all of a sudden she SLIPPED. "Someone help me, help, HELPP," lily screamed. No one was coming for her. Did this mean she was going to die? Was she going to die by falling from her window? She could see the newspaper headlines. Girl Mysteriously falls from her two- story window. Parents are baffled.
"Help!!!"She cried. "Someone please help me!" she cried again. And suddenly like out of a fairy tail a bus stopped in the street. All of a sudden her hands let go but she fell on something soft. And then she realized she was in midair frozen. This is really scary lily thought.
Someone stepped out of the bus and helped her to her feet.
"Hi my name is Earl," he said "and where might you be going?"
Lily who was feeling a little light headed replied, "Diagon Alley," She started to feel very light and airy. Everything after that she didn't remember.
When she awoke she was on a bed, she didn't know how she got there and the bus was making such a loud noise.
Then the guy who had saved her came up to her bed and said, "You fainted and I got strict orders to take you to diagon alley. "B-but who told you that, and where am I?" lily said.
"Oh sorry he said," he said, "you must be a muggle, this is a night bus. It is for witches and wizards who need a ride to get somewhere." He looked around and lily noticed there was no one on the bus. "Well it is not very busy tonight as you can see," he said.
Something then struck lily,"uhm how much does this c-cost?!?!" "Oh don't worry about it, it's for free. Like I said I have strict orders from the ministry to take you to diagon alley. Anything they need from me is for free. And besides that I doubt you have any wizard money." he said.
It was true lily had brought all of her money, but she didn't have any wizard money.
Finally they reached a large street. "Is this diagon alley sir?"
"No hold on." He pushed the bus doors open and walked over to a brick wall and tapped it three times." Now this, is diagon alley," he said after the brick wall turned into a large street.
It was amazing lily thought, and was the largest street she had ever seen. It was quite empty but she figured it was because of the time at night.
"Oh ok thanks earl. I owe you one I guess.
"Your welcome," he replied. He started to walk towards the bus again.
Wait Sir! How do I…" Lily didn't get to finish, earl had already gone and lily didn't know what to do. It was still dark out. She looked at her light up watch and it was 4 am.
She shivered. She didn't remember to bring her jacket. She already missed home and realized she had to write a letter to her mother first thing in the morning, if she was to wake up. She didn't want her parents to freak out. Lily sat against a street wall, and exhausted as she was, fell asleep.
************************************************************************A/N ok that was the first chapter, please review I really don't know how to write this, so im still trying to get the feeling of this story. If you don't like it tell me, most likely the first 3 chapters are going to be boring! I have the second chapter done, but not on the internet, I just wanna know what you guys think before I keep going. If you have any ideas e- mail me at lbstar26@hotmail.com Ok bye –LilynjamesAAF