So please read and review I am a new writer and I would very much appreciate constructive criticism.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters if I did Nix would totally happen and Eight would... well you know.
My head rested in her lap as she stared down at me like a worried angle. Dang how did I get so lucky that she was the one who was with me. "Idiot! You are such an Idiot." She cursed down at me. If it where any other time I would have relished in the fact that she is even hotter when she is angry but her brow scrunched in worry and the pain in her eyes broke my heart. "I didn't even know you cared sweetheart" was my weak attempt at making her smile. I even added in the cocky grin that usually gets a rise out of her but it goes all horribly wrong as the movement causes the pain to sharpen. What was supposed to be a reassuring smile sends Six into more of a panic which she desperately tries to hide. Her once steady hands begin to tremble and the fear of losing me dumps on her at once. "You're going to be ok. John or Marina will get here soon." I can tell these are just lies she is telling herself then me. We both know that I am not going to make it. Her eyes are surveying the damage the Mogs caused when I took the hit meant for her. "Six, I want you to know-" It takes so much effort but I need to get this out, I want to die with no regrets. As soon as I begin I am cut off when her soft lips touch mine making me forget the pain. It was soft, delicate and "Wow" was the only thing I could say. She chuckles lightly "Save it you can tell me when your better." The last thing I saw was her beautiful face before everything faded to black.
Well there you have it my story please review and let me know what you think.