Mosskit sat coldly next to Mistykit and Stonekit. Mommy, please hurry, I'm cold. Stonekit was lifted out of the hole. Mommy, what about Mistykit and I? She tried to wiggle her toes and flick her tail but she couldn't feel them. She looked down to see if they were still there.
Mistykit was lifted out of the snow hole, her blue eyes were drooping. "Mommy, what about me?" Her voice came out as nothing more than a whisper on the breeze. She laid her head on her paws. "Hurry, Mommy." She closed her bright green eyes, laid her gray and white head down on her spotted paws and sighed. "I'm sorry, Mommy." She closed her eyes and she faded away into the snow.
Rewritten:
Stonekit was lifted out of the hole.
Stonekit was lifted out of their snow casket that cocooned them and kept them out of the frigid cold. Mosskit looked in horror at her brother's fading form.
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