Hey, I'm a new writer here. This is my first story I've ever published outside of school. I'd love it if you'd review my work (though I'm not going to force you to) so I could get some positive feedback or constructive criticism. Thanks!
Gabriella was a lively soul. Everyone embraced her presence at East High. When she first arrived more than a year ago, no one even acknowledged her. But she soon renowned herself; not as the "freaky math girl," but as the girl who stole Troy Bolton, star basketball player's, heart.
It was more than a year ago when she met Troy at the ski lodge during winter break. They sang their very first song together and slowly built their relationship up to its level today. Their love for each other could not be broken, and their minds were always focused on one another, whether it be school or home.
She took her first steps up the stairs to the school where she was greeted by her best friend, Taylor, and Kelsi. Although Sharpay had befriended them after the callbacks of the winter musical, she had gone back to her usual, sour self as soon as the spring musical had graced its presence at school, but Zeke still persisted that her attitude would change. Of course, Gabriella and Troy had gotten the lead roles, leaving her and Ryan with supporting roles; same for this year's winter musical. Sharpay was furious. All her work since grade school, all her dreams of starring in each and every play she'd auditioned for, had been shattered that one day where Troy and Gabriella had given their informal audition.
"Hey guys!" Gabriella said.
"Oh hey, girl! So how was your weekend?" Taylor replied.
"Well, I didn't see Tro—"
"Is that all you think about?" Kelsi cuts off her reply.
"Pretty much." They all smiled and exchanged laughs.
"Oh, here he comes." Kelsi and Taylor had decided to leave and as they marched up the stairs, Gabriella had turned a shade of pink. Although she and Troy had been dating for a considerably long time, she'd still feel those butterflies floating around in her stomach. It had made their relationship more exciting.
Troy gave out a few "Hey"'s and "What's up?"'s before finally arriving at Gabriella. He wrapped his arms around her waist and greeted her with a passionate kiss before saying, "Hey, I missed you this weekend."
"As well, Mr. Bolton." She gave him a smile, and he returned it.
"How was my freaky genius girl without me?"
"Lonely," she laughed in reply. "And my freaky callback boy…?"
"Lonelier" he said in response, kissing her forehead.
They took a moment to look gaze in each other's eyes, and he broke his grip around a now, very red Gabriella. He held out a hand, and she entwined her fingers in his as the walked to class.
She loved the feeling of being with Troy. He made her feel safe; almost like she was indestructible, invincible whenever she was with him. As long his strong arms remained around her, she'd never have to worry about anything.