Im trying some of these sorts of stories cause i read some awesome ones so yeah and Jak and Dax will be in this story i just dont now when maybe this chap maybe the next

"Character is talking"

'Character is quoting'

CHARACTER IS YELLING SOFTLY

CHARACTER IS SCREAMING THEIR HEAD OFF

Character is thinking

(Extra information you dont really need to know)

LOUD PHYSICAL IMPACT!!!


Chapter 1 The most boring day EVER.

I woke up, it was 12:36pm "Damn I think im sleeping in a little too late, oh well"

I got up and turned on my ps2 (it has to be like 8 years old now) when the front door opened

"Hello?!" i heard my aunty Jenny say

"In here" i heard my mum say

"That means April is here" i murmured, so i quickly got dressed and went outside

"Hey April" i said with a wave

"Hey Munchkin" she replied

I frowned, why does she call me that? Im not lacking in height, weight, anything really.

"Come on" i said starting to go to my room "im going to play my PS2 wanna watch?"

"Yeah ok" she followed

We sat on my bed as i grabbed my favourite controller (i am a very possessive person) and started the game; it was one of my favourites Jak2; i was about to load my game when Teigan (my sister) walked right in front of the screen (as she always does)

"While you're there turn off the light" she did as i asked

"So whatcha playin?"

I sighed "Jak2"

"But you have finished that like" Teigan paused "200 times"

"No i haven't finished yet"

"How?" she asked confused

"Because it says 105% complete, i take that as a not finished, im guessing it might be out of 120% or something like that" i replied

"Not that again, remember with Jak and Daxter? And the 99% thing"

"Yeah but i was missing ONE FLAMIN PRECURSOUR ORB! I just HAD to find it, and i did so yeah doesn't matter"

"HELLO! I am here too you know, what are yous going on about?!" said an irritated April

"Nothing, dont worry" when i changed my mind and started a new game instead, it was just starting when i heard Teigan and April gasp

"What?" i asked staring at the screen

"Uhhh Tenile do you notice something different?" They both said

"Should i?" i asked

"Well let me explain, you're playing and electronic item correct?" she said as i nodded still looking at the screen "while there's a blackout!" she finished slightly yelling

"Since when?" i asked not believing her

"Since everything else that's electronic ISN'T working!"

"Ok i see your point" i said trying to stay calm "Ahh! What's with April!, April! Are you ok!?" i said worried as my cousin was being sucked into the TV

Teigan grabbed her arm and tried to pull, but it was not working as she too was being sucked in

"TEIGAN!" i yelled grabbing my sisters leg and my bag hoping it would get stuck on something, at this moment i could only see April's ankle, but that soon changed when we were suddenly pulled right into the TV

My heart was racing, i was weightless it felt nice but this is weird and i am worried, i tried to keep hold of Teigans' leg, but my hand loosened, i jerked towards to right of the rift it seems this side was slightly faster as i sped by April and Teigan their faces full of terror and fear, i was sure my face was the same, i dreamt about going somewhere different but not THIS sort of different!

"I see light" i said as i looked backwards, April and Teigan were right behind me on my left, side by side, just out of reach though, i got closer and closer towards the light, i shut me eyes tight but could still feel the burn of the bright light when i felt gravity returning to me, i fell and i just had to say it

"DAMN YOU GRAVITY!!!!!" and after falling for 2 seconds later

BOOM!!!

I hurt all over, it felt like i fell into sand, i was waiting for Teigan and April to come and crush me but they never came

I pulled myself up and it hurt like hell but no bones broken to my surprise

I started to look around, it looked like i was in a dessert, a very big dessert

"Hmm could this be the dessert that Jak is sent to in Jak3?, if so i may be able to find Haven or Spargus" I thought for a second "I'll go to Spargus City" and i started to walk in the direction i thought was right.

----- 2 hours later -----

I sighed

Im so thirsty, i really need a drink of anything

I looked up and saw something very strange

My house? It's my imagination

But that didn't stop me checking it out, i walked inside the green house, everything was normal; Bella the dog was asleep; the TV was on so i looked at my room and it was the same as i left it and then i saw it, my box of chocolates

"Yum i wonder what it really is" i sighed i was hungry too but i had no idea what that could be but i could not hold back any longer and i lunged for the chocolates

I bit into the first chocolate it tasted really nice

Jeez my imagination must be really good

When i finished, i couldn't help myself to a bottle of water even though i knew it had to be a fake but that didn't stop me

I walked out of the house and continued to go to Spargus City, i kept looking back to see if my house would disappear but when i did it was still there

I was getting bored but still not lonely, all i need was with me

Me Myself and I

----- 3 hours later -----

It was starting to get dark, and i was growing scared, cool and worried so i stopped and got out my book from my school bag and started to write

It has been about 5 hours since i landed here if you're wondering how i know this i grabbed my bag and it had my phone and strangely my charger dont ask me why by the way i am doing this because im bored i am also a very bad writer and speller so if someone dose find this

I stopped, got up and started walking again

God i think im going nuts

I found a nice place under a cactus and laid down and soon went to sleep

----- 7 hours later -----

I suddenly woke up, not because i could hear weird 'bumps' through the night, nope because of what happened next.

I looked in disbelief

How could this be happening!!! I screamed in my mind I must be crazy!!, i mean i did not, NEVER did i think this could EVER happen!!

I still stared

Im in a world where alot can happen, but i never thought something like THIS could happen!!

I did the only this i could do


(Me) And i think i will leave it there *giggles*

(Duckii) i wanna know!!, tell me!!!

(Me) Nope, never!! You'll have to wait

(Duckii) Fine.... but you know Dookii won't like not being in the know

(Me) I dont care anyway READ AND REVIEW!!

(Tamalia) *opens door* Who are you guys?, i dont like people in suits

(People at the door) Where Naughty Dogs lawyers, is a Tenile here?

(Me) Oops.. I TENILE do NOT own ANYTHING that is-

(Tamalia) Remotely Cool

(Duckii) OR belongs to Naughty Dog

(People at the door or Naughty Dogs lawyers) Ok it seems it has been fixed, good day madam

(Me) Thank god anyway RNR bye