Hey Guys, TheWizBow here. This is the new story I was talking about. I also want feedback for this story. As Always there is gone be Gluxa in this story but it is also gone be realistic. So let's start of the story then.
Chapter 1 did that just happen? :
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Oh god, it is the first school day! Gregor jumped out of bed and ran to get his clothes. He was exited for school because he wanted to know if he was going to get a cool class. It was already 2 years since his last visit to Underland and he actually didn't want to go back. His mother had already prepared his breakfast. So he quickly took a slice of bread, put it in his mouth and ran to the door. But he forgot something, just after he left the apartment het realized that he forgot his mobile.
"Oh shit my mobile" Gregor thought. After he got his mobile, he got downstairs, took his bike and cycled to school. His school wasn't far away. Only 2 miles or something. After Gregor arrived he put his bike in the bicycle storage. And he walked inside. Actually he didn't know where he had to go. He asked some other people around. Until he asked a girl.
"Hey, I'm Gregor which class are you from?"
"Oh, hey Gregor. I'm from 3A2"
"Me to! Uhm do you know which classroom we have to be?"
"Oh yea, 146"
"Thanks! But what was your name? "
"Emily but most people just call me Emi"
Gregor walked to the classroom with Emily. When they got in the Teacher said that they were just in time. Only 2 places Next to each other where left. So Gregor and Emily just sat there.
The teacher explained some things about how important this school year was but Gregor didn't give a fuck. They got their books and their locker key. He went to his locker and wanted to put the books in that he didn't need. After that he wanted to walk away before he crashed into Emily. Her books fell.
"Oh god. I'm so sorry Emily. I really am"
"It's Okay Gregor."
Gregor wanted to pick up the books for her but they picked up the last one at the same time. Than Gregor saw that their hands where on each other's. Emily quickly picked up the book and took the other ones from Gregor. Just like she didn't want him to touch her or to talk.
Gregor's day went good after that he worked a bit in the lessons and talked to people the get to know them better.
But when Gregor cycled back something strange happened. Gregor was cycling until he saw a face, a face that looked like the one from Luxa. He looked at it for too long and a car crashed into him.
The Driver stepped out and looked if he was okay. Happily he didn't break anything. Than when he looked back at the place where he saw Luxa, nobody stood.
Gregor cycled to his home and told his mother about it. She told him that she found it a bit strange
He also told about what happen between him and Emily at school.
After diner Gregor went to bed to think about this day. He found it a bit strange to, was he freaking out? Did he like Luxa to much? He stopped thinking and went to bed.
The Next Morning:
Gregor awoke, still a bit confused for what happened yesterday. But also excited because he knew that he wasn't gone see Luxa ever again. And he actually liked a girl apart from him. So he was Excited to see Emily. Then Gregor stepped out of his bed, took on his clothes and got to the kitchen to eat something. Then he went to school. At school he went to math where he sat next to Emily. They talked a bit, this was the first time in ages Gregor enjoyed talking to a girl. After the school day Gregor went to his locker. Then Emily came to him.
"Gregor….. Do… you….. Maybe want to do something tonight? Together?"
"Yes!" Wait what that was a bit to exited"Oh uhm... yes, what do you want to do?"
"Maybe go to the movie?"
"Good idea. I talk to you when I'm at your home."
"Bye Gregor"
Emily blushed a bit. Gregor got to my bike and cycled to home. It was late and dark. Gregor cycled through the park until someone jumped in front of Gregor. It was a girl.
"Luxa?"
Question of the day: Why is Luxa up in the overland in the park, waiting for Gregor to Cycle past?
That was the first Episode of this new story. I think it is a better start than the one of my first story.
Give me some good feedback and reviews if you like it or if something needs to be improved.
I will talk to ya guys later. Bye…..
-TheWizBow
