The Adventures Of Kotazikama vol.1

my first fan fiction hope you like it =)
if you like it there will be more volumes and give me feedback on if you like it or not

*yawning* boring school why am i here anyways? *walks back home* what no! don't hit me please don't hit me don't steal my money i come in peace *crying* "this happens everyday and i'm sick of it i need to fight back at these people. *Goes back home bruised* "hello dad" Kotazikama says,
"what happened to you" dad says, "oh nothing just fell over at school" kotazikama says,
*in kotazikamas head* "i don't want to live like this anymore i need to stick up for myself".

[Next day]

walking down the street and turned my head around and spotted a poster, *Reading the poster in my head* Karate lesson free to learn if you been bullied punched kicked come we will train you up to fight for yourself. *thinks about it* i choose to take the karate lessons walking in and still have bruises on my legs and arms i have the courage to walk in here and ask the sensei for karate lessons,

*goes through the door* meets a man wearing a robe with a black belt he bows down to me and greets himself as yoshi katizami, "Hello yoshi I have came here for karate lessons" Kotazikama says, "Ok my son you have came to the right person, i see you have got alot of bruises on you what happened exactly" yoshi says "I got hit by 3 people with fists and i couldn't fight back I was weak" Kotazikama says.

Well come back in 2 or 3 days when all those bruises heal and we can start training you to be strong.

3 Days later...

Hello yoshi i'm back hello my son you here to start training karate "yes sir" kotaz says, well lets start straight away with the kicks,
kick this bag 100 times for starters and i will comment on how you Are going "ok" *kicks bag 100 times* your technique is very bad i will fix that for you, You have to kick it like this kotazikama.
"ok sir" *kicks the bag until i get the correct technique*
"ugh! my stomach" "ring the ambulance yoshi i think i am dying"
*yoshi rings the ambulance fast*
*ambulance comes in 5 minutes and shifts kotazikama in the ambulance*
ambulance rushes quickly to the hospital and rushes kotazikama to the emergency room* *yoshi by kotazikama's* "am i going to die yoshi"
"am i really going to die this young" " i never got to learn off you"

*kotazikama falls into a coma*

The dream of kotazikama... To be continued...