hey hi, this is my first story. i may not be very good at it but it's Bioshock. I know the lore and universe well but i may forget some things, if anything comes to mind some constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Anything to get better am i right? anyway enjoy!
I don't suppose you've ever time travelled, dimension hop, and were knocked out all in the matter of hours. No? Just me? well let me explain a bit then because i think i lost you. I'll start with my name, it's Genesis Jones, thats my allias its easy to say and easy to remember. Now let me catch you up to speed here. In mid 2007 a game was created that took the gaming community by storm, it lost it's muster but it was game of the year. It's now 2038 and everyone have nearly forgotten it, that's whats odd about this. I played it and I fell in love with it. Then about twenty years later (give or take a few days) I get a strange job offer in the worlds most advanced country Japan. So far there Isn't a connection except the letter that came in the day i was supposed to leave for my plane. I picked it up on the way and when I read it, well it made me stand stiff. "Would you kindly Board Apollo Air." This didn't just strike me odd, this threw me on the ground with a clap of lightning hitting my- well... anyway. Slowly and hesitantly I veered from my path to the other plane going over the Atlantic to London, I didn't know where it was going. Oddly i already had a ticket paid for and the attendants escorted me to 2nd class. I walked on the plane and a flash happened as I did, I instantly became aware of where i was. "Oh no.." i said quietly under my breath and i knew that there was no way off this horse now. I grabbed a flight attendant and asked a very simple question and I was thrown off by the answer. "1960, you been living under a rock?" I felt insulted and looked at my seat number and went to it.
I would have been fine if it was a coincidence, that i time travelled. It happens all the time these days. When i got to my seat and sat down the first thing i noticed was the blue present and the card on it. "To Jack with love from mom and dad would you kindly not open until 63 2N 29 55W" with a few other marks below it. Jack was a name that was common in some parts but for some reason it affected me more in that moment then any other, then my seat mate sat down. He had a yellow sweater with a white shirt under it with the collar poking out, blue jeans and nice dress shoes, Jack. I knew it was inevitable so I went to sleep and let whatever happened happen. I woke up in the water, I looked around, i was floating on my back with my head rubbing against a hard rock wall, a light flickered above me and i stood up, on a stair case. "Rapture" I said slowly, I turned at the soft chopping of water and pulled someone from the ocean, of course like clockwork it was Jack. "What happened to the plane!" We both walked up the steps to a large door. "I don't know i went to sleep." we were inside so neither of us needed to shout, the lights came on and i noticed he was avoiding my eyes. I knew what happened i was giving him the chance. I looked up at the huge statue of a man. "No gods or kings only man." I said out loud like a joke, Jack chuckled and i smiled. I tilted my head gesturing to the lights, I went down, my boots made a soft sound and i tried not to make a squeak noise from them. Jacks shoes made a soft clicking noise at each step. Down the circular stairs there was a huge ball with lights, a massive window for a door, and a lever inside it. "You first..." Jack prompted me forward and i sighed as I stepped in, red lavish seats were on both sides. "It's a submarine!" I shouted loud enough he heard me and he walked in. I took hold of the lever and looked at him. "Nothing ventured, nothing gained." I sighed and he nodded as i yanked it down. Not where i wanted to go, but its where I ended up.
Hey Hi, welcome to the end of chapter one! how was it? good? bad? not enough or to much? please tell me what you think, also have a good day you beautiful people!