Run for you life remake

Guess who is back! If you were reading the original story, I'm really really sorry I didn't continue, I just run out of ideas and I didn't know how to continue, but I doing the remake (if you like the first chapter of course); the story may look shorter because I didn't added all like I did in the first chapter of the original version and to see if you like the story.

I'm sorry for grammar mistakes, english is not my first language!

ILY all and still I'm really sorry I hope you enjoy the chapter

Ally's P.O.V

I was running into the darkness, I don't know why so I keep running. The place started to feel cold, I was tired but I don't wanted to stop then I heard it, there were steps behind me, someone was following me, I turned to see who was it but I didn't seen anything, only darkness, suddenly I felt something cold getting me like a hand, I screamed but it didn't matter the thing or person that I still didn't know what it was already got me.

Then all turned black and the last thing I heard was a horrible laugh.

*BEEP* "Ugh" *BEEP* "Allyson, Wake Up!" My father screamed, I got up and the first thing I did was grab my book.

Dear Diary

Guess who is gonna be the new girl again?

Yep you get it, me….

I'm really getting tired of moving, just because my dad can't keep a job because his alcoholic problems since mom died.

I really miss Eliot he was the only one that understand me but now I'm here in Miami and he's in Chicago Ugh my life sucks, hopefully we're gonna be able to stay here for a very long time, hopefully.

Well I need to get ready for my first day in Mariano High School, I'll write later.

Love Ally

I closed my book and got into the shower, I already knew it was going to be a very long day.

I decided to wear a pair of black skinny jeans with a mint sweater and my favorite pair of boots, I grabbed my bag and I made my way downstairs.

"Why are you taking so long Allyson? I'm already late for work!" My dad said pissed "I'm sorry dad" I mumbled and he just glared at me "Whatever I'm going" He said before leaving me alone but he didn't remember he was going to take me to school today, luckily the school wasn't that far so I decided to walk (Yeah like if I have another option), I grabbed and apple and started my way to my new life.

'Mariano High School'

When I get to the school I noticed that I still have free time before the class start, so I make my way to the offices to get my schedule, a very nice woman received me "Oh you must be Miss Dawson, I guess you're here for your schedule right?" She inquired nicely and I smiled at her "Yes, how do you know I'm Ally Dawson?" I asked her intrigued, she gave me my schedule and said "Oh well I've never saw you here so I supposed you must be Allyson, the new girl" I just looked at her and thanked her, and then I made my way to my locker.

When I was heading to my locker I noticed that a bunch of cheerleaders where standing in front of my locker so I decided to ask them nicely if they can move, I mean they didn't look like bad persons.

"Hi Um… Can you please move? That's my locker" I asked them, a pretty look dirty blonde girl turned to me "Sure, you must be the new girl, I'm Cassidy those are my friends Chelsea and Britney" She said pointing at her friends, okay they are nice people that's good. "Hi" I whispered, they just looked at me and said hi in a harsh tone, then they move so I can be able to search my locker but the next thing that I knew is that I was falling, Oh I was so wrong about them, suddenly I hit the ground and everybody in the hallway turned to me, great I hate attention, I've panic stage fright so I'm not having a great time right now, good way to start my new life Ugh, suddenly all the people start laughing so I look down ashamed but then a hand appeared in front of my face so I looked up just to see a cute blond guy, wait did I just say he's cute!

"Here let me help you" He said to me with a charming smile that I gladly return the smile and I took his hand, he got me up so fast like so I got a little dizzy and almost fall again but he catch me "Hey it's okay, it's my fault for got you up so fast" He said a little ashamed and then Cassidy interrupt us "Austin, what are you doing?" She said to him clearly pissed, Austin turned to her angrily "What do you think I'm doing? I'm helping her after you pushed her!" He answered her in a harsh tone, she was glaring at me and then she looked back to Austin "Yes I know, I'm not stupid, what I want to know is why?" She said "Well because she didn't do anything to you!" He said now clearly angry and I just wanted to disappear.

"Ugh whatever, you're helping a nerd and defending her over your own girlfriend" She said angrily, of course she was going to be his girlfriend, I mean look at her, she is a cheerleader, blonde, skinny and pretty….. But then my thoughts were interrupted by Austin "Stop saying I'm your boyfriend, I'm not!" He said almost screaming obviously Cassidy was getting his last nerve. "Ugh I can't believe you're doing this to me! I'm the most popular girl here and you're choosing her! I mean have you seen her?!" She yelled at him and that was all I needed, I ran away of there to the farthest bathroom and cry, the worst part was that I think she was right, I scanned the bathroom with my eyes, it looks like no one use this bathroom and then I looked at the mirror just to look a lost and insecure girl, I can't believe my life is so miserable, I want my mom alive, I want Eliot, I want a happy life.

Suddenly the door opened, I didn't want to see who it was, probably someone how wanted make fun of me "Are you okay?" a concerned voice asked then I froze, it was Austin "Wha-what are you doing here, it the girls bathroom I whispered still not looking at him, "Well this bathroom it's supposed to be cursed, but that's not true obviously, so no one come here" finally I face him and he just smile "Let me help you" I didn't understand him till he grabbed a piece of paper, putted a little water in it and started cleaned my face, the little amount of makeup that I was using was ruined, "You know I can do that by myself" I mumbled, he looked at me with those hazel eyes and grinned "Yes I know but I want to do it, it doesn't bother me at all" he finished cleaning my face and turned to throw the paper away.

"Thanks" I said to him in a low voice, "Oh it was a pleasure, a pretty girl like you don't deserve to cry about this kind of things, I'm sorry for Cassidy, she is used to get all the attention by the way I'm Austin, Austin Moon" he said to me and then he extended his hand to me and I just stared at his hand, "You know you're supposed to say your name and shake my hand" he said to me "Yes I now" I said almost in a whisper "I'm Ally" he was still waiting to me to shake his hand but a few seconds later he realized I wasn't going to do it so he put his hand down a little disappointment on his face but he hide it with a smirk "Well just Ally, may I have the pleasure to get you to your class?" He suggested in a british accent and a broken smile appeared in my face "That's what I wanted to see, a pretty smile for a pretty girl" he said and I froze "D-do you really think I'm pretty?" I said in a whisper then it was the turn of Austin to freeze, suddenly a little blush appeared in his cheeks "Umm Y-yes I m-mean it" He said nervously so I smiled at him, that seem to relaxed him "Yes Ally I think you're very pretty" he told me not nervous this time "Well thank you" I said and it was my turn to blush, "And yes" I said a little insecure "You can take me to class" I said and he took my hand and we make our way to our class.

Well it looks that after all it wasn't a bad starting for my new life

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