"The Prince of Sword Art Online"
All rights to Sword Art Online belong to Reki Kawahara and Aniplex USA and whoever else owns SAO
"Dialogue"
(Additional information)
Setting up scene or character's action
'Thoughts'
My character and story is heavily inspired by "Sword Art Online: The White Swordsman" by HolyKnightX, which is a great story you should go and check out. My OC is also loosely inspired by Griffith from "Berserk" but isn't a piece of shit like Griffith is, seriously fuck that guy.
I hope you enjoy my story
Chapter 1
(Akio Oshiro is a 15 year old boy with snow white hair and ice blue eyes. Though on the outside he is happy and kind to others, inside however, he was lonely which was caused by the death of his mother and further enforced by distance his father had shown after his mother's death. As a way of escape, he took up gaming. He managed to get into the beta test for Sword Art Online, the world's first VRMMORPG)
Akio is currently inside of a Kendo Dojo and is facing a fellow Kendo student. Akio's opponent attacks him with speed, but no skill. Akio parries his attacks effortlessly, then he then parries his opponent's last attack hard which in turn causes his practice sword to go flying, Akio then lunges at his prey, ending the attack when the tip of his practice sword rests against the man's throat. He's stands shocked and defeated, while his parried sword is lands somewhere else in the room and then the entire class erupts with clapping and cheering
"Perfect as always Mr. Oshiro!" said a kendo member
"That's another one defeated miserably" responded another sadly
"Well what do you expect? The guy won the nationals!" said his friend
"Great job, nearly had me there" Akio says with a smile on his face as he removes his helmet reveling his white hair and angelic face
"Man… You're just saying that to be nice" he said miserably
"Not at all, you're talented. Your speed was impressive, your only problem was your technique. It was flawed and predictable" He says to him to hopefully help him improve, they both bow and leave
Later, when Akio is waiting for his driver to pick him up and is thinking about playing Sword Art Online once more
'Sword Art Online... man. Can't wait to be back in that world!'
"Akio!" said a voice in the distance, running up to Akio
"Huh? Oh Sugu, how are you?" Akio says happily
(Akio met and befriended Sugu when she started going to the same Kendo place as him)
"Oh I'm good, you did great today. He didn't stand a chance" said Sugu
"He did well, just needs improvement" said Akio
"I suppose. Any way you look pretty excited, is something going on?" Sugu inquired
"Sword Art Online came out today. I'm waiting for Akinobu to pick me up." said Akio
(Akinobu Atusushi is the Oshiro family's longtime driver)
"My older brother was getting ready to play that game when I left" said Sugu
"Was he? Oh, there's Akinobu got to go. Have a good day Sugu!" said Akio with a smile
Sugu blushes in response and nods
"You too, A-Akio" said Sugu with the blush still present
"See you" said Akio as begins walking away
Sugu shakes her blush away and turns to him
"Have fun!" said Sugu
Akio smiles and nods in response
He then enters the limo
"Hi Akinobu, how are you?" Akio says to Akinobu
"I'm fine how did your match go, Akio?" said Akinobu kindly
"Well enough, my opponent needs practice though" Akio says in response
"That so? Anyway where to? The mall right?" said Akinobu
"No!" Akio screams franticly
Akio then coughs and corrects himself
"I mean, I'd like to go home Akinobu" Akio asks politely
"I know, I was just teasing. You couldn't stop talking about that game yesterday" Akinobu says as he starts driving
"Sword Art Online, and I'm just excited for it is all" Akio corrects Akinobu
"Virtual Reality" Akinobu says in awe
"Back in my day we had use these things called controllers, heard of them?" continued Akinobu
"Yeah…" Akio says weakly
'VR was just released, I've only been playing with controllers as of now' Akio thought to himself
Sometime later
"Here we are, enjoy your day Akio" said Akinobu
"Thank you, enjoy your day as well, Akinobu" Akio responds
Akio then enters Oshiro Manor
"I'm Home" Akio says out loud
(Akio's father, Chikao Oshiro is a calm man with black hair and blue eyes and is currently talking with Shouzou Yuuki on the phone, Asuna's father)
"Alright, I'll see tomorrow Shouzou" said Chikao as he puts the phone down
He then notices Akio
"Hello Akio" said Chikao
"Hey, was that Mr. Yuuki?" Akio asks curiously
"Yes that was him. We were just talking about you and Asuna" said Chikao to Akio
(Akio and Asuna met at a business party and became best friends. But they are both unaware that their parents are planning to wed them)
"What about me and Asuna?" Akio inquires
"Nothing that needs concern you as of yet" Chikao says to his son
Chikao then begins to walks off, but stops suddenly
"Akio, later I would like to talk to you about something. Something that I've been meaning to say for a while now" said Chikao
"Uh... ok" Akio says to Chikao who then gives a small smile and leaves
'What does he want to talk about?' Akio thinks to himself
A bit later in Akio's room
"Well let's get started" Akio says while putting on the NerveGear
"Link Start!" Akio semi-yells
A burst of colors floods his vision and then a list of options pops up
Language: Japanese
Login Name: Haru
Password: *******
[Default Character]
Akio then appears in the Town of Beginnings, he had long black hair and red eyes. He was dressed in the basic starting equipment, and a basic saber at his side.
(A saber is a type of curved sword, same kind that Griffith uses in "Berserk")
He then begins to run off around town looking for anything new. He doesn't find anything different from the beta, so he decides to go do some leveling in the field. While in the field he stumbles across a player with long blue hair fighting a boar with a rapier, she gets caught off guard by another boar spawning nearby. Akio then rushes in killing the newly spawned boar
"Hey are you okay?" asked Haru
"Yeah, I'm fine. I guess I was caught off guard huh?" said the girl while smiling like a little kid
"Yeah, I'm Haru by the way" Haru replies with a big smile while holding out his hand
"I'm Asuna" the girl responds still smiling and shakes his hand
'That's funny, her in-game name is the same as my best friend's name' thought Haru to himself
"Have you played an MMO before?" Haru asks curiously
"No, this my first my time playing an MMO or games in general" replied Asuna
"Really? You really looked like you knew what you were doing" said Akio
"I thought it was easy for everyone?" said Asuna confused
"Evidently not" Akio says and points towards two players
One of the players had long black hair and the other had even longer red hair. While pointing towards them, one of the boars charged and rams the red haired player.
"I guess not" says Asuna and giggles
"Well, I'll be off" Haru tells Asuna
"Wait! I was actually wondering if you help me with some stuff?" asked Asuna
"Ok, I can do that. Since I'm going to be helping you I might as well add you to my friends list. If that's ok with you that is?" said Haru
"That's fine" said Asuna with a smile
Haru would like to be your friend. Accept? Yes/No
She then clicks yes and two starting leveling together. Haru teaching her a few things along the way, till suddenly there teleported in the town square. Then the sky starts bleeding and figure appears.
'A game master? Probably just an event welcoming the players to SAO' Haru thought to himself
What he hears next is not what Haru or anyone else expects…
End of Chapter 1
Thank you for reading! This is my first time writing fanfiction, so please be understanding. Anyway, if any of you have suggestions, please say so. Also I'm spilt between making this an OCxAsuna or an OCxSuguha story, so if you have suggestions then leave a comment.