Ok so this is a story i've been writting on youtube. I hope you like it...i dont care if i get bad review. Please tell me if i should keep on writing.

Ally's POV: Hi my name is Ally i'm 16, My best friend is Austin we have been friends since kids and we have great friends Trish and Dez. Although i get worried for Dez! I think he was dropped as a baby! But we get all along. Well most of us Trish and Dez are always arguing but Austin and me think it's FUNNY! AND Austin and me are neighbors which is cool. Our parents are great friends they are like "Best Friends" Weird i know!Oh well that is pretty much my life.
Ally:*Talking w/ customer* Here you go sir and have a nice day! *smiles*
Customer: Don't tell me what to do!*leaves*
Ally's POV: Ok that was just mean!
*Austin/Dez walkin
Austin: Hey Alls
Ally: Hey Austin*starts cleaning counter*
Austin: Hey ally wanna come w/us to the food court and get ice cream!*Smiles*
Ally:*smiles* Ah yea sure, Wait where is trish?
*Trish walks in, wearing a candy costume*
Guess who got a job at Candy World?!
Ally: WHO?!*Sarcastic*
Trish:*Doesn't notice the sarcastic* Me!
Ally: Cool, Hey trish wanna come w/us to get ICE CREAM!
Trish:OH HECK NO!
Austin: Why! ICE CREAM IS AWESOME!
Dez: Yea it is the best food ever made!*Smiles big*
Trish:*rolls her eyes* I was eating candy all day at my job instead of working and now my stomach hurts!
Ally: Well do you at least wanna cm?
Trish: Ah sure! I was gonna get fire anyways
Dez: OK lets go *starts hoping away*
Ally/Austin/Trish *laugh at him nd start following him*\
-At the foodcourt-
Austin/Ally/Dez*enjoying there ice cream*
Trish*Staring at them eating*
Allly: Trish if you want ice cream go buy some
Trish: 1st of all i don't buy things i get them for free
Ally: *rolls her eyes playfully*
Trish: ...nd 2nd i can't if i eat anything else My stomach is gonna explode!
Austin/Dez: AWESOME!
Ally/Trish:*look at them weirdly*
?: OMG your AUSTIN MOON!
Austin: Yea the only one!*smiles at her*
?:*Blushes*Um can i take a pic w/u?
Austin:Ah sure!*winks at her*
*Austin nd ? take the pic*
*Ally get's jealous but doesn't show it*
*Trish notices ally getting jealous*
* Dez just enjoying his ice cream*
Austin: so what's your name
?: Rosy
Austin's POV: Ok i admit Rosy is pretty hot. But i do like ally. Who am i kidding Ally WILL NEVER go out with me i will ruin our friendship.
END of POV
Note: OMG ally getting jealouse?! Will austin go out with Rosy?
MAN Dez really loves ICE CREAM. LOL
Ok i will try to write the next one PLEASE comment and like! :)