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A couple of weeks ago I was reading this story called 'Elsa and the Englishman'. I enjoyed the story concept, however in terms of grammar and spelling it was poorly written and lacked the proper punctuation for it to be a good story. Nonetheless as it was deleted I felt it appropriate to continue the story with proper grammar in order to make it publishable. I have contacted Enoch (the original publisher) and he has agreed to allow me to continue his work as he hasn't got a computer and can only write on his phone (hence the poor grammar due to spell-check and poor user interface) Thus it is up to me to continue the story from the point where he left off. To fill anyone in who hasn't read the previous story a Colonel called George Davies has recently been deployed to Norway after tours of France and Africa where he fought at the battle of waterloo. The Norwegian (Arrendellian) forces are close with the British army and he has been deployed to assist with training the troops and as a show of unity between the two nations. This is where he met Elsa and the two fell madly in love. At this time Anna and Kristoff also got engaged. After going to a ball, the two started to stay together more often and the relationship progressed on. A few months later George has been deployed to the gold coast and has been captured by an Ashanti tribe where he was nearly killed but was spared by the chief. The war has started and word is sent to Arrendelle that George is dead and this crushes Elsa. The story will pick up from after he has been captured. Please leave a review if you agree with me on this or if you think that the story itself was the problem and not the grammar issues associated with the author using his phone instead of a computer.