Ok so sup?. Sup. annnnywayysss this is a new story of mind it sound okay to me for a being even thow it is offly short.but it seems ok so far and one reveiw it would help get my mood up right now iam having a hard time with X boyfriend and bestfriend. but any ways i dont think you just clicked on this to hear me blabber...or maybe you did becaues you love me lol. probly not but yeah so try to review it makes me feel warm and fuzzy in side like a panda.(it just poped into my head )
Disclaimer- heres a short poem- Roses are red violets are blue i dont own this characters so please dont sue.
Exsepct Koaiy i own him. and you say his name like this .(Ki-O-u) like i-o-u but with a K ;D
On this night One cried .On this night One died. On this night one Became Alive.
As the oceans mist-cold and unforgiving, hit a young girls angelic face gently while she started at the silver dagger engraved with gold. It wasn't any old dagger. No. It was special. This dagger was engraved in gold. With a rose, its stem full of thorns yet on the other side there lie only the stem no rose.
She smiled weakly at the sword which had been a gift from her beloved. But as she pulled the sword swiftly and painlessly out of the center of her rib cage the man in front of her stared in wide eyed horror.
"Koaiy what has driven you to this?" The young woman asked gently yet angrily.
"What do you mean me!" The strange man yelled to her.
" You...You...killed them. You slaurtted them all!" He yelled why still amazed that the woman still breathed.
"So Koaiy. You are afraid of me...the woman you loved and sworn to protect yet you stand her and plunge a dagger though me and by the means no less my dagger you gave me..." she said effortlessly.
"Kagome dont bring love into this! You killed them all!" The man yelled again.
"I Did Not!' Kagome yelled with bright fury and anger in her eyes.
"I did my part of being a goddess! My rules are - Those who doubt me. Shall die. Those who confined me. Shall die. And those who love me...Shall die".She finished her sentence while plunging the dagger into his heart.
While he screamed in pain, Kagome simply whispered. "You did not follow the rules."
And One Died...
Ok so i just read over this and it sounds soooooooooo dramatic! and i think the last line was lame. it remined like sorry the game or somthing you cheated thing like but anyways i could think of a ending line but if you would like to help me write this or have any comments or something that could help me or make it better or would just like to make my day by leaveing comment in the reveiw box. but if you would like to help me private messge me please .