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Rowling. So yes, I own bugger all really, don't sue me....please?
Wheyyyyyyyyy! Well here I am, a story on the go, tell me what you think and review. It only takes a few minutes of your time doesn't it. You might as well. I'm trying really hard in this story not to make the girl a Mary Sue. I think I'm doing okay so far. She isn't perfect, so yeah, whatever. Just get yourself reviewing, ta very much!!!
Lives and Loves - Sirius the Superior
Orla looked up from the exam paper, the clock said that there was still ten minutes to go. 'What a doddle' she thought to herself. She quickly read her paper, just to make sure that there were no silly errors then put her pen down. Looking directly ahead of her, she felt an odd squirm in her stomach. They would sit him right in front of her for one of the most important exams of her life. He was enough to distract anyone. Of course, she was thinking about none other than Sirius Black. To her he was the epitome of beautiful. His accidentally perfect hair, that fell just in the right place, and those eyes, deep enough to fall into... She snapped out of it quickly, realising how stupid she must look to anybody watching her.
"Quill down, please!" squeaked Professor Flitwick. "That means you too, Stebbins! Please remain seated while I collect your parchment! Accio!"
Orla laughed silently as the Professor was knocked to the floor by the flying parchments. After being helped up by some of the students they were all dismissed from the exam room. Orla immediately found Lily, who predictably began obsessing about the paper.
"Oh Orla! I think I've done really badly! On question ten I don't think I explained the movement of the pupils correctly!"
Orla looked confused for a moment, pupils? Lily loved to go over the exam papers, but Orla wasn't much of a fan of the past time. She was quite bright, but not really one of the high flyers, not like Lily.
"Don't worry Lil', it's over now, it's not as if we can do anything about it, so just chill. Come on, it's a sunny day. Why don't we go sit by the lake? Might take your mind off exams for a little while." Lily gave a 'hmm' of agreement, and the girls strolled out of the building joining some other pupils who seemed to have the same idea as Orla.
As soon as they sat down on the bank Lily took the exam paper out of her bag and began studying it intently. Orla rolled her eyes and lied down on the rich green grass. She looked around at the pupils, relaxing and trying to forget about the up and coming Transfiguration exam. Then she spotted Black on the top of the hill with his friends. He was looking as gorgeous as ever.
"Lily, do you think Sirius Black could ever like me?" Lily looked up from her exam, one eyebrow raised.
"No Orla, I don't," Orla felt her stomach give a churn and her throat began to tighten. "He likes himself too much to bestow any of his feelings on anyone else." Lily gave her a swift smirk and then went back to her paper.
"No, really Lily, do you think he could?" Orla had a desperate look in her eyes now that Lily had to take seriously.
"I don't see why not. The fact that you've got more brains than most of the girls he's been with might put him off though. Oh yeah, and your C- Cup breasts might not be quite big enough either."
"Lily!"
"I'm being serious! He's so shallow! I can't believe you even like him anyway!" Just then there was a commotion at the top of the hill. "Oh look, it's your boyfriend and James Potter, being arses again."
Lily strode over to the scene, eventually breaking it up. Orla just sat where she was, ignoring the din at the top of the hill and relaxing in the heat of the sun. So Lily thought that there might actually be a chance of her and Sirius getting together. Well, a slight chance, but it was a chance all the same! Looking up she found that Lily had disappeared from the top of the hill and that weird kid Snape was walking away from the scene shouting curses in all directions. Orla stood up and walked towards the main building. It was best not to leave Lily by herself after she had been in a rage; it just made her thoughts linger on it. She gave Sirius is swift glance a she passed the tree, he wasn't looking at her. He seemed to busy looking cool and superior. Orla shook her head and jogged towards the entrance hall. She really needed to get that boy out of her head.
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Go on, review, you know you wanna. You wanna see whether Sirius will EVER look at Orla. You wanna know what she looks like, and you wanna see if I can succeed in my battle NOT to turn her into a Mary Sue. Bye for now.
Wheyyyyyyyyy! Well here I am, a story on the go, tell me what you think and review. It only takes a few minutes of your time doesn't it. You might as well. I'm trying really hard in this story not to make the girl a Mary Sue. I think I'm doing okay so far. She isn't perfect, so yeah, whatever. Just get yourself reviewing, ta very much!!!
Lives and Loves - Sirius the Superior
Orla looked up from the exam paper, the clock said that there was still ten minutes to go. 'What a doddle' she thought to herself. She quickly read her paper, just to make sure that there were no silly errors then put her pen down. Looking directly ahead of her, she felt an odd squirm in her stomach. They would sit him right in front of her for one of the most important exams of her life. He was enough to distract anyone. Of course, she was thinking about none other than Sirius Black. To her he was the epitome of beautiful. His accidentally perfect hair, that fell just in the right place, and those eyes, deep enough to fall into... She snapped out of it quickly, realising how stupid she must look to anybody watching her.
"Quill down, please!" squeaked Professor Flitwick. "That means you too, Stebbins! Please remain seated while I collect your parchment! Accio!"
Orla laughed silently as the Professor was knocked to the floor by the flying parchments. After being helped up by some of the students they were all dismissed from the exam room. Orla immediately found Lily, who predictably began obsessing about the paper.
"Oh Orla! I think I've done really badly! On question ten I don't think I explained the movement of the pupils correctly!"
Orla looked confused for a moment, pupils? Lily loved to go over the exam papers, but Orla wasn't much of a fan of the past time. She was quite bright, but not really one of the high flyers, not like Lily.
"Don't worry Lil', it's over now, it's not as if we can do anything about it, so just chill. Come on, it's a sunny day. Why don't we go sit by the lake? Might take your mind off exams for a little while." Lily gave a 'hmm' of agreement, and the girls strolled out of the building joining some other pupils who seemed to have the same idea as Orla.
As soon as they sat down on the bank Lily took the exam paper out of her bag and began studying it intently. Orla rolled her eyes and lied down on the rich green grass. She looked around at the pupils, relaxing and trying to forget about the up and coming Transfiguration exam. Then she spotted Black on the top of the hill with his friends. He was looking as gorgeous as ever.
"Lily, do you think Sirius Black could ever like me?" Lily looked up from her exam, one eyebrow raised.
"No Orla, I don't," Orla felt her stomach give a churn and her throat began to tighten. "He likes himself too much to bestow any of his feelings on anyone else." Lily gave her a swift smirk and then went back to her paper.
"No, really Lily, do you think he could?" Orla had a desperate look in her eyes now that Lily had to take seriously.
"I don't see why not. The fact that you've got more brains than most of the girls he's been with might put him off though. Oh yeah, and your C- Cup breasts might not be quite big enough either."
"Lily!"
"I'm being serious! He's so shallow! I can't believe you even like him anyway!" Just then there was a commotion at the top of the hill. "Oh look, it's your boyfriend and James Potter, being arses again."
Lily strode over to the scene, eventually breaking it up. Orla just sat where she was, ignoring the din at the top of the hill and relaxing in the heat of the sun. So Lily thought that there might actually be a chance of her and Sirius getting together. Well, a slight chance, but it was a chance all the same! Looking up she found that Lily had disappeared from the top of the hill and that weird kid Snape was walking away from the scene shouting curses in all directions. Orla stood up and walked towards the main building. It was best not to leave Lily by herself after she had been in a rage; it just made her thoughts linger on it. She gave Sirius is swift glance a she passed the tree, he wasn't looking at her. He seemed to busy looking cool and superior. Orla shook her head and jogged towards the entrance hall. She really needed to get that boy out of her head.
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Go on, review, you know you wanna. You wanna see whether Sirius will EVER look at Orla. You wanna know what she looks like, and you wanna see if I can succeed in my battle NOT to turn her into a Mary Sue. Bye for now.